Late at night on Hearth's Warming Eve, Lyra Heartstrings stops to rest at a park bench.
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Sometimes I write stories here. Sometimes I write stuff for EQD. I like Hemingway and McCarthy and Ellison and King.
Late at night on Hearth's Warming Eve, Lyra Heartstrings stops to rest at a park bench.
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What a crappy ending.
SADNESS D:
Well, that was depressing as shit.
Thumbs up. Predicting feature box in less than 24 hours.
Does it make me terrible that when I saw this:
All I could think of was this:
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If this gets into the feature box, I'll have a heart attack.
Nah, I thought about The Room too.
And now I can't get it out of my head!
Oh God, I knew it was coming. And still so sad. Darn it. Well done. I'll PM you 'bout something.
I feel like the ending is terribly abrupt. And you should definitely space between lines of dialogue, I don't know why you didn't.
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Someday, when I'm not busy, I'll come back to this and fix it.
Thanks for the feedback.
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I know that feeling!