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Of dirt and water, in everywhere that is to be, does the celestial body give onto her seeds all that they need to be. For they shall be guided through night and day, of sister's right, regardless of love or spite.

From hooves so cold they cut the ice to freedoms hard fought only to give rise to threat of eternal night. An guise mistaken, harbored in isolated, cast to lunar winds in stark contradiction. Of best intentions hidden through discretion, does one pony cast upon the veil their forbidden creation.

Of talons given of might to paws too small to continue the fight does struggle and strife find opportunity to strike. Robbed of choice but given of chance, one shall move forward with but an unreadable book held by his only hand.

So be as it may, reap what you might, all shall be equal to the wane of wisp's light.

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Comments ( 5 )

5489546

I'm very happy to see that kind of reaction, even if I am unsure how I would react to that specific expression. It did make me chuckle and I appreciate the show of interest.

At first I thought it was a Pumpkin Scissors crossover and I was all "Yes!" but then I saw the tags and then I was all "Aw...but still seems interesting.." Not even on regret.

Well this got interesting fast...

You sure have my attention now. Loving both the narrative style and plot you have going on.

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Very satisfied to hear that, Adamanthys. I somewhat feared that the introduction arc was growing too long but wanted to make sure that I set up the paths by which the story will move forward, even if there are going to be several, so readers could judge early.

Thank you again for the solid feedback!

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