• Member Since 25th Jun, 2013
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The Asexual Jelly Bean


I am the most worthless FimFiction writer ever! My fanfics are horrible, and I do nothing productive for society! Welp, read my stories if you feel like it, though.

Comments ( 16 )

Maud is so hot that she can't even resist herself

I request a sequel elaborating on that Maud x Mom.

Anatomy lesson: You seem to have the G-spot confused with the Clitoris.
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Maybe the skirt's odd string is just that tight as to reach the g spot?

“Nothing! Just stepped on a Lego!”
:facehoof:

5382892 I'm with the awesome artist.

She could feel something pressing against her G-spot,

Do you mean her clitoris? Her G-spot is inside her vagina.

She was 22 years old and virgin,

<looks around>Some people wait until they are twenty-three, and still say it was too soon for them later. No names, but I know some-one who thinks like that, and I see their point.
5382892 I second this! I thought the last few lines almost ruined it, but it would be a good one shot.

5383320 I actually already knew that. It was a mistake I made during writing, and completely forgot about it again. I realized I made the mistake when I read it myself, but never got around to fixing it. When I then finally uploaded it to Fimfic, I had forgotten to correct it.

Fixing it now, though :)

Thanks anyways. :)

5384346 About the G-spot thing, I already corrected it. It was honestly more of a mistake, I already knew about that ^^

The virgin thing - You see, I always imagined Equestria being in another time. Back in the day it was normal to lose your virginity at 15. She was 20, and her mom thought it was weird. This is more from the perspective of the writer.

I'm not trying to offend any 22 year old virgins, simply writing it the way I think it would be in Equestria.

5382892 I would love to write further. I planned on doing so. And I'll consider it.

We'll see where it goes. Just don't get your hopes too high :)

The story was good until the end did you really have to add incest? Other than that hope to see more stories by you.

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Honestly, I only put that in for the comic relief. Didn't expect anyone to actually get offended by it.

I don't support incest, but I don't mind it with cartoon characters.

5390272 I really wasn't offended by it it just confused me on why the fuck her own mother would do that to her

My only issue here: It should have been Pinkie who saw her first, then pounced on her rock vag. Then her mom would walk in on the two and stare before joining in.

5392784 Well, doing that would lead to me having to make a sequel or continue the story, which I don't plan on. The whole mom-part was simply in there for fun, I didn't really plan to do anything with it.

I really suck at writing clopfics, and this was solely made for the purpose of satisfying my friend. He told me I should upload it here, so I did :P

5393058 That's such a nice thing to do for a friend. Again, not a bad clopfic. It was just the ending, that's all. Don't let the critics bring you down, keep those fanfics coming.:D

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