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I ask only that you would forgive me, should I ever truly go hollow, that you would not hate me for falling asunder to the insanity.
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3737010 Funny you should mention.
She's up next. 
Lol oh i was testing out how to do pony faces could u help me i only know pinkiesmile
Lol oh i was tryin new ponyfaces i dont knoe how to make them culd ya help me?
3737017 I was trying to make a new pony face thing I don't know how to do them could you tell me please?
3737020 Hmm, let's see how many I can get from memory: ajbemused, _, ajsmug, _, ajconfused, ajunsure, coolphoto, _, _, derpytongue, fluttercry, flutterrage, _, _, _, _, pinkiecrazy, pinkiegasp, pinkiehappy, pinkiesad2, pinkiesick, pinkiesmile, rainbowderp, _, rainbowhuh, _, rainbowlaugh, rainbowwild......... Wow, this is a long list, you know what? Can you see the icons to the right in the comment box?
3737036 darn thanks i mean it but wut right conment box?
3737044 To the right of the comment box, there should be a number of pony faces. Click them to pick the face. I know most of them by heart now, but clicks are faster, so, yeah.
3737046 on computer? Im usin my phone
3737047 Ah. Okay, aye, it's on computer. Anyways, yeah, there's some for reference.
3737051 thanks thanks thanks
I liked it :)
A bit short and the dialogue felt a bit... forced. But I liked how she talked to herself.
3737071 Forced dialogue? No, no, that simply will not do. I'll have to fix that in the next chapter. Then again, I'm a bit wary when writing for Applejack, and this was my first ever clop scene, so, yeah, I'm learning. Next one will likely be clop-less, so that, and having only two characters I like to think I can slip into very easily involved, should make for a decent-length, interesting, and much higher flow chapter.
Also, yeah, I can almost call the whole "talking to self" bit a convention of mine. I seem to be doing it a lot in my stories lately.
Hmm, I had mixed feeling about this.
On one hand I like the fact that Rarity fucked Applejack... I didn't like the fact that there wasn't more :(
Oh well time to fave and wait for more.
3737097 Well, if this is well-received, though I haven't a clue why it would be moreso than the stuff I actually put decent time into editing and such, then I'll have an Epilogue kinda showing how things play out after all the "favors" are done with.
Rarity should've used Astroglide™! It's perfect for all of your... uh... sexual needs?
they were gonna kill me if I didn't plug them
3738139 No worries, I understand. I just hope you enjoy the things to come.
Wow. This was unexpected. Interested to see what comes next, if not necessarily anxious.
3738155
(Snicker)
3737017
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Dis gon b gud... Will this chapter contain some well-deserved
3744150 Ohai! I remember you. Also, I'm gonna have to put Twilight's chapter last, 4giggles and stuff. Okay, but seriously, hers will be kinda funny and cute, I'm hoping. That said... HERE'S PINKIE!
3749138 Sounds awesome! Can`t wait for the next chapter.
Pinkie is Adam Jensen.
3753610 Wow you read fast.
3753622 It's a blessing and a curse. Sometimes people don't believe me and yell at me.
3753622
I liked this one. OK, you have my attention now
3753644 I know really fast-reading friends and family, so it's nothing new to me.
3753649 Well, thank ya. I'll hopefully have the next one up soon. Let's just say Rarity gets herself in some deep... well, you know the saying.
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Well, I don't "know" what you are saying.... But I can read in between the lines, and infer what you are saying rather well.... or I might be in the mood for another mountain dew..... one of the two.
I think I am in trouble though, because I asked Pinkie Pie for a favor
3753681 Oh no, Pinkie pays in pastries and possibly... yeah, not finishing that one, for reasons, anyways, if you can read between those lines, you have sharp eyes, careful, might cut yourself like Rarity. Anyways, just remember to never take too jokingly or too seriously. I'm liable to change my mind or charge in with full literallity on everything I say I may do. Basically, this thing is gonna get crazy.
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3753711 Just remember you asked for it when you're yelling for the eye-gouger.
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Yelling for it? Why would I need to yell for it when I always have it with me
You never know when you'll have an eye gouging emergency
3753729 Just saying this, I LOVE how you have both Pinkie and Scootaloo emotes on the end of the second sentence. My fucking ref senses are blazing.
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3753752 You get the reference, right?
3753756
Nah, not really I still have slow momentum... But I did read in between the lines and I have a feeling it has something to do with Pinkie vs Scootaloo, but with Pinkie in the lead.
3753767
Pinkamina and her assistant Sadistic Scootaloo from the same tumblr where the "characters" Pinks and Rarity are cosplaying as come from. Look up Pinkamina's tumblr on YouTube and edumacate yerself, youngun. 
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OK, now I get it!
OK, I do that way to much
3753828 Anyways, off to start on stuff.
Huh. Not sure I totally understood this one, but whatever.
3756104 Pinkie Pie has spent the past few months euthanizing OC's that were born into the world and never again touched, unfortunately having to side-step their strange tendencies through a cosplay as PInkamina. Rarity ends up forced into a role cosplaying as LMS(Little Miss Rarity) to help.
Pinkamina is a sadist, while LMR is a masochist. To fit the roles, Pinkie had to act like Pinkamina, and Rarity like LMR, else the OC's(keep in mind, these are ALL OCs that were either abandoned or no longer have any "grand destiny" Mary Sue's and Gary Stu's included) would riot.
... That help?
3756309 Yeah, it did. Never actually heard of LMR, though. Anyway, next time I don't understand something, it's fine if you just tap into your base instinct and call me a fucking dumbass. This is the internet, you know.
3756507 Of course, of course, but then I wouldn't be a good writer if I was mean in the comments of my own stories, now would I? PR and whatnot. Besides, get more flies with honey and all that jazz.
3756599 True. One time I went through my typical massive review on a story, and the author basically told me to fuck off with everything I said. Stopped reading the story shortly after.
3756676 See? I hate authors like that, so pretty much as long as it's not legit bs, spam, or a troll that isn't amusing me, I'm usually cool with it. The internets have given me some pretty thick skin.
Your story has been officially graded a dirty...
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Amethyst by the Gem Hunters.
Gotta say, I initially didn't really have high hopes for the story. It felt like a clop of the week type of scenario. This chapter, however, gave me some hope that it would be more than that. Your spelling and grammar show no notable problems, and now that I realize that this might be a bit creative, I will most likely keep watch of it myself.
3770568 Woohoo! I gotta say, for a story I almost literally spewed words into until I pulled out something cohesive, this seems to be the best-fairing of my works, minus the rather average vote ratings. Also, you may, or may not, be happy to know I will be updating as soon as I can with a very, for lack of a better word, "interesting" chapter.
Hope you enjoy!