• Member Since 12th Dec, 2014
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ForgottenBliss


My writing may be sub-par, but hey, it's better than like, nothing. Profile picture here: http://underpable.deviantart.com/art/Selene-489020842

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Ash Mist was simply traveling to Peace Corps HQ when suddenly, an event changed the way she saw things forever. This is the story of a mare who travels many places to solve a simple mystery of who did what. What she did not know, however, is that the answer of this question could change the fate of the war forever.
Thanks to SkyshadeBrondtie for supporting me and proofreading my work!
Edit: I had cancelled this. However, I saw the support I got from this ONE person and decided to continue it. Until support dies, then it will just go on hiatus.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 14 )

To anypony it may concern, I plan to keep my chapters short and to the point. Please, if you have a problem with this, let me know and I will try harder to make them longer. This first chapter is simply a prologue of sorts. Didn't really have the biggest amount of ideas once I laid everything out for everyone to see.

5371937 I actually liked the Prologue! Good job :)

Aww, that's so sad ): But I love it :)!

Somehow I feel a Star Wars thing going on here. Or there's just been a sub fandom that I've never known about. Hmm. This requires investigating.

Oh the fanciness is real!:duck:

Oh, just a bomb fell is all! I'm sure that happens all the time. I mean the news wouldn't be interested in terrorists would they?:derpytongue2:

"Ok, tell me all about it!"
"Well, we got bombed."
"W-what? Are you okay?"
"Yeah, but some other ponies weren't though. Lots of them died."
"I-I just-"

My sleep depraved mind has come up with this conversation. I should go to bed.:applejackconfused:

Yeesh, talk about family troubles.

I enjoy this story. Thumbs up and a favorite!

Very short, but meaningful! You get a thumbs up!


...I have hooves...

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