The Spatial Anxiety, an unmapped region of space outside the Sol-Gaea Empire, the future dominion of man-kind, has dominated the minds of explorers for years. Unknown entities and planets lurk deep in this dark pocket. Two men, one a soldier, another a man of science, survive an ambush and find themselves headed towards a massive silver sphere. It's insides were unknown until now. The adventures of these men will be a shocking one full of all kinds of dangers.
Title spelling error is on purpose
Chapters (1)
Well that was a good start looking forward to more.
Also just cause I can FIRST
5327445
thank you!
Great start! Just found a small error in the first paragraph "largest sentient-made object every creature" I assume you mean ever created. Other than that it was kinda a confusing start but I look forward to see where this goes
5327494 Thank you, my good sir.
I've just corrected it.
Great premise! I can't wait to read more. While some of the grammar and word choice should be reconsidered for smoother flow and comprehension, this first chapter promises a fun and exciting read!
Also, Destiny can do that to you. ;p
5327516 NP :)
Cautious optimism here, lets see what you do.
The title is misspelled. This does not bode well for the rest of your work.
5362710
Its on purpose.
5363342
What the fuck does re-quim mean, then, the female refractory period?
5363737
No.
The spelling was on purpose.
It will play a part later in the story.
5363737 Razzle you slut leave the writer alone, other wise I will have to use a crucifix on you!