• Published 25th Nov 2014
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The Things That Change... - Night Spark



It laughs like you do. It has your face. It watches from the dark. It breathes with the wind. It lurks in the black. It howls from the Everfree.

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Comments ( 4 )

Well it's about damn time. :raritywink:

OMG NO!
I was so excited to have an update and now...now..now its done! :raritycry: :raritycry: :raritycry: :raritycry: :raritycry: :raritycry:
I need another chapter!

However, I do suggest breaking down the paragraphs. It was really hard to read throughout the chapter and I found myself skimming over some sentences and had to reread it a few times. :twilightsheepish:

5361194 its not done yet... One final chapter is all that remains...

I'll take your advice on the paragraphs!

5361841
Oh dear, I just meant that the chapter was done! :twilightblush:

I'm excited to see the next chapter!

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