I love ww2 stuff, and research about it, I love dogfights without heat speaking missliles, and other cools stuff nd Greenwich isn't my timezone
The nazis have won. The war ended 40 years ago. Life is fine for the most part, just a bit harsher. To harsh. To militarized. WE MUST RISE!!!
This is a story from a shared account, named humanstanksandponies. The story didn't come out quite right. It may seem cheezy, and it's in a "this story sucks cuz I say so" group. And I never gave them permission to do that.
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Aw come on, it's in a hate group?! No wonder it has so many down votes! People need 2 get permission 2 do this stuff! Ugh...
*cheesy
First, no one in the "hate group" (criticism group) would use such horrendous grammar and spelling. "Cuz"? Seriously?
Second, there is a reason stories can be added to groups without permission. Multiple reasons actually.
Third, calling people dicks will just bring more hate. So will deleting this comment.
Fourth, you twice used the word "to" instead of "too" in the description. This means your story will probably contain even more errors. The title lacks capitalization and the description days nothing about ponies. I don't even know if this is a pony fic.
You broke the rules in the description. Teen stories can't have swear words in the description.
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Ok, I won't delete UR comment. I'm not one of those comment deletes. I'll delete the bad word, and thanks.
5318466
K, I'll fix that. Thnx!
5318466 ok, I'm gonna be asking around, do you want me to continue this story? Because I'm reading back on it and nothing makes sense. It would be FUN to keep going, but the fact that everybody wants a story to make sense instead of just for fun sorta scares me...
5972803 Well there is always the possibility of rewriting.