• Member Since 27th Nov, 2011
  • offline last seen Aug 27th, 2012

chlochlocola


I love my little ponies and writing, so you (hopefully) can understand why i'm here! i hope you enjoy my fan fics!

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Of course on the day of my job interview, I go and mess everything up as usual. Nice going, Ditzy. Well, I'll be going to talk with the princess about this.

My life is problem after problem. Oh, and if this is you Dinky, I told you to stay out of my room. Put my journal down.

I recommend starting from the first chapter, as you can pick your path.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 17 )
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Holy crap, Derpy discovered a conspiracy and didn't even know it! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh:

I understand that Ditzy is the person this is "written" by, but I still can't follow what's going on.

um alot of witchcraft refrences but okay:raritywink:
very nice:rainbowkiss:...but it doesnt make very much sense:trixieshiftleft:
keep it up anyway:twilightsmile:

548985>>551769

So pretty much It's Ditzy's journal and she's talking about what happened or who did what on whatever day. Like the chapter with the doctor, that pretty much means ditzy was hanging out with the doctor that day or recently.

I know that much, that's not what I meant. I can't understand your description of events.

559653 ah okay sorry about that. :twilightblush: i kind of have that ramble-y type of writing. I try fixing it, but I'd need another person, because my writing in my eyes is alway grammatically correct. :twilightsmile:

592151 I have a somewhat similar problem. I'm very concise (to the point where I can take ten chapters of a book and turn it into six paragraphs) so when I try to make something long, I tend to say the same things over and over but with slightly different words.

599714 :yay: I'm not alone!

Sorry I can't help out with that. :duck:

627434 Dude, it's fine if you can't help, the ability can be pretty useful as well.

Unfortunately, it's hard to find a situation where it IS useful. Especially if you have to write a 1,400 word essay :facehoof:

...How is it unneeded? I'm using a picture to express my feelings rather than words.

835823 You know.... wait, what? You're right. :twilightblush:

849421 HA! I'm right! But that's to be expected, considering I'm infallible.

GAH SORRY I'VE BEEN GONE EVERYPONY! I was on vacation and forgot about our little derped pega pony :facehoof: Sorry bout dat.

I GIVE UP IM SORRY EVERYPONY. I just can't find the time.:fluttercry:

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