Charm Bracer, a socially awkward and quiet pony, decides to leave the city life for wherever the next train is going to. He happens to hop a train that says "Ponyville" across the side. Hilarity ensues as he's quickly introduced by the Elements of Harmony, mostly Pinkie Pie. Charm Bracer hates parties and social events alike, and now this "Pinkie Pie" threatens to join his "I Hate" list. Will she be able to get him to his "Welcome to Ponyville" party? Stay tuned and find out, folks!
This is my very first ever fanfic, criticism is by all means welcome and is greatly appreciated!
Chapters (6)
Good start.
A good oc....
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Luv dis story
498006 probably because there's no shipping involved. (some oc shipping stories is good but rare)
hmmm may i have moar please I'll give you a moustache
This amuses me.
Keep it up.
Nice job.
I'm sensing there will be a straight hair pinkie scene.
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I wanna get one in there somewhere. I have some of it planned out up to about 4 chapters, hopefully over the next few days I get some more plot mapped out
This is hilarious.
BUT RAINBOW DASH IS NOT A LESBIAN.
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Well first off I would like to say thank you, I never thought myself much of a comedian
Second, I don't really believe that either, but I figured a play on the old joke would be fitting here
500325 Okay. Love and tolerance accepted!
Well I can safely say that Charm is the most unlucky pony ever. He is antisocial, but everyone he meets loves him. Everyone thinks he's hitting on them, and the only pony he does like is even more antisocial than he is. I never thought I would say this but... THIS OC IS AWESOME
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Would you believe me if I said it was my first OC ever?
500381 Well then. When this story is over I would like a story about the various misadventures of Charm Bracer. That sounds nice.
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Heh, I'll definitely try
This poor guy....
On another note, you are doing a good job on these chapters despite the short time you take.
Not too shabby. Better than quite a bit of the rest. Unfortunantly that doesn't say too much.
However, I'll read whatever else you throw out at me, so write away........ and with your quality, probably getting thumbs up for each story along the way.
...WUT?