That was a awesome and sad read I'm happy we got to learn more about him and his life before he got there .His life was so sad I hope his new one better and full of awsomeness .It was also awesome to get to see his other half I hope we see more of him.I can't wait to see what happens next.
Karma’s a bitch isn’t it Rainbow Dash? 😤😏😈 You just had to remind of his past to make him snap? Seeing that she got a punch to face and met the wrath a reincarnated god is satisfying enough for me. Hope she learns not to be such an insensitive bitch. If was in Troy’s shoes, I would’ve reacted the same way.
damn rainbow just wow i think she has earned the title rainbow bitch extraordinaire you got to sink to a new low to do that to some one i can understand eris doing what she did with the playful flirt thing cause like they say with pinkie she is being herself but RD major points off for that shit i think she is digging her grave to the point they will just have a restraining order on her and celly kind of looked like she was going to put her in the dungeon if RD push any more. Oh yeah can't forget all the others on how they reacted to his tale and Gleaming knows how to deal with some one in his mind set so she can lay the ground rules for the girls on him and also i think rainbow lost the chance he was going to give her by the looks of it.
You really stepped out of line, Rainbow Dash. That was highly uncalled for, you deserved to can ONE PUUUUNCHED, I hope you think things over and reflect on what you said.
The real question I'd like to ask is: "Why is Dash being a collosal bitch?"
There's a significant difference between loyalty and being concerned about a possible threat an unknown like our main character here and the legitimate baseless hatred and paranoia that she has displayed towards him so far. You desperately need to have a good reason for her behavior or you will sink this story, for me at least, due to the blatant bashing of RD solely for the sake of drama, which is just lazy writing in my opinion.
I figure rainbow dash was still going to hate troy even if Celestia and Luna said he was there brother but now she really blown it I figure this would happen. So if Celstia and luna fall in love with or are already in secret love with troy, well he may bring up its wrong to have incest with his sisters cause he grew up in a world where incest is wrong and the law teaches it, of course in equestria it may not apply in Equestria and since troy is the only male and unless more male humans who are not married come to equestria well troy is the only soon to be male alicorn that they could marry and Celestia and Luna may indeed be secretly in love troy I mean there is also the possibly that flurry heart is planing to secretly have sex with troy just cause the way she said that she'll have an uncle soon and that its going to be interesting in the last chapter flurry heart may be planning to have sex with troy only she has to make sure he dose not run away from her.
hope this updates soon it's really good and i want to see what happens 2 rd and if troy becomes king of the world cause he is the only male and other races might want in on the dick
“THEY’RE DEAD!! THEY WERE KILLED ON MY FUCKING BIRTHDAY!!!” He shouted. All eyes, save for Eris, were now on Troy in shock at what they just heard. Even Flurry, who hardly ever show emotions, was visibly shocked hearing this.
I was not exspecting that 😢rainbow you could not just leave him alone could you
I am so disappointed, I was so interested by the summary, but with a pussy-overreacting and “tragic” main character, making Rainbow Dash unlikeable, not to mention the drama feels unnecessary because I thought this was suppose to be a comedy romance, this really waste the potential. I am so done with this fanfiction.
if you plan on making any more chapters i think it would be a good idea if troy fights rainbow dash and they both hurt each other extremely badly but while there both beaten and unable to move they talk things over and settle there differences and become friends like when naruto fought gaara
I was half expecting Troy to say to Rainbow "is that your fantasy? maybe you like to be raped, to be pinned down and dominated by someone stronger than you, to be dominated and made their breeding bitch. Eh? you got fed up with doing it with just females, you want to feel a big, hard, hot meaty shaft fill you up and ream you senseless before filling you with a big hot load of cum". Or something along those lines.
Okay. I don't want to be that person who tries to bring logic to clopfics buuut... HOW IN NAME OF CELESTIA'S FAT ASS DID THE PONIE SPECIES SURVIVED TWELVE HUNDRED YEARS WITHOUT A MALE. Because when i last checked, that's not how biology works
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Holy shit Dash just got decked but she had it coming. Great chapter Sonic cant wait for more!
Nice new chapter. Glad to see it. Although, I can't wait for a new one to come out sooner rather than later.
Ouch... then again, my parents had a rather messy divorce when I was in my early teens... and I was at the god damned center of it.
Uh, you might want to up his age by one year, just to be safe. The mods take that rule seriously
Pretty interesting stuff so far. Wonder what's next, and when?
Cant wait for more!!! This got interesting. He went Saitama on the wall!!
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He turns 18 in two weeks.
with how Equestria operate I say its a miracle his eyes didn't turn green
now that I call “Awakurae”
good new chapter. keep up the great work and ill be passionately awaiting the next chapter
That was a awesome and sad read I'm happy we got to learn more about him and his life before he got there .His life was so sad I hope his new one better and full of awsomeness .It was also awesome to get to see his other half I hope we see more of him.I can't wait to see what happens next.
finally a new chapter
great 1 at that keep them coming
I hope someone actually asks Rainbow why she's so hostile to him.
Karma’s a bitch isn’t it Rainbow Dash? 😤😏😈 You just had to remind of his past to make him snap? Seeing that she got a punch to face and met the wrath a reincarnated god is satisfying enough for me. Hope she learns not to be such an insensitive bitch. If was in Troy’s shoes, I would’ve reacted the same way.
damn rainbow just wow i think she has earned the title rainbow bitch extraordinaire you got to sink to a new low to do that to some one i can understand eris doing what she did with the playful flirt thing cause like they say with pinkie she is being herself but RD major points off for that shit i think she is digging her grave to the point they will just have a restraining order on her and celly kind of looked like she was going to put her in the dungeon if RD push any more. Oh yeah can't forget all the others on how they reacted to his tale and Gleaming knows how to deal with some one in his mind set so she can lay the ground rules for the girls on him and also i think rainbow lost the chance he was going to give her by the looks of it.
I was waiting for this to be updated. Can't wait for the next part.
Why haven't you killed Rainbow Dash yet?
i really hope the next chapter comes soon
You really stepped out of line, Rainbow Dash. That was highly uncalled for, you deserved to can ONE PUUUUNCHED, I hope you think things over and reflect on what you said.
The real question I'd like to ask is: "Why is Dash being a collosal bitch?"
There's a significant difference between loyalty and being concerned about a possible threat an unknown like our main character here and the legitimate baseless hatred and paranoia that she has displayed towards him so far. You desperately need to have a good reason for her behavior or you will sink this story, for me at least, due to the blatant bashing of RD solely for the sake of drama, which is just lazy writing in my opinion.
I figure rainbow dash was still going to hate troy even if Celestia and Luna said he was there brother but now she really blown it I figure this would happen. So if Celstia and luna fall in love with or are already in secret love with troy, well he may bring up its wrong to have incest with his sisters cause he grew up in a world where incest is wrong and the law teaches it, of course in equestria it may not apply in Equestria and since troy is the only male and unless more male humans who are not married come to equestria well troy is the only soon to be male alicorn that they could marry and Celestia and Luna may indeed be secretly in love troy I mean there is also the possibly that flurry heart is planing to secretly have sex with troy just cause the way she said that she'll have an uncle soon and that its going to be interesting in the last chapter flurry heart may be planning to have sex with troy only she has to make sure he dose not run away from her.
REALLY RAINBOW REALLY YOU JUDY HAD TO KEEP BEING A CUNT well at least you learned your lesson ... when is the chapter I need to know what happens
update?
Daaamn, Rainbow Pegasus just got dropped!!
I wanna see more!
When's next chapter?
hope this updates soon it's really good and i want to see what happens 2 rd and if troy becomes king of the world cause he is the only male and other races might want in on the dick
I was not exspecting that 😢rainbow you could not just leave him alone could you
I was just wondering when there's going to be another update?
Why does it need to be specified that they are over 18? I mean it is a fantasy story... it is not illegal on this site for underage porn stories..
I am so disappointed, I was so interested by the summary, but with a pussy-overreacting and “tragic” main character, making Rainbow Dash unlikeable, not to mention the drama feels unnecessary because I thought this was suppose to be a comedy romance, this really waste the potential. I am so done with this fanfiction.
And don’t even get me started the main character’s name. Troy Cornelius Hunter??? Seriously? Sounds clearly like a Gary Stu name.
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if you plan on making any more chapters i think it would be a good idea if troy fights rainbow dash and they both hurt each other extremely badly but while there both beaten and unable to move they talk things over and settle there differences and become friends like when naruto fought gaara
Please continue on with the story it is just getting good at all like to see what happens in the end
This story is so good when’s the next chapter I can’t wait?
Is there going to be a new update soon?
I was half expecting Troy to say to Rainbow "is that your fantasy? maybe you like to be raped, to be pinned down and dominated by someone stronger than you, to be dominated and made their breeding bitch.
Eh? you got fed up with doing it with just females, you want to feel a big, hard, hot meaty shaft fill you up and ream you senseless before filling you with a big hot load of cum".
Or something along those lines.
Okay. I don't want to be that person who tries to bring logic to clopfics buuut...
HOW IN NAME OF CELESTIA'S FAT ASS DID THE PONIE SPECIES SURVIVED TWELVE HUNDRED YEARS WITHOUT A MALE. Because when i last checked, that's not how biology works
And do not come with "because magic"
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In the story it says starswirl made a spell that would allow two mares to have children together
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Well, this is a "because magic" explanation but i think i can accept this one
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I think the spell most likely turn them into a transgender for a short time but since their was no male dna to impregnate the mare they were born as mare with no chance of becoming stallions
any chance this will be updated soon?
Hey when the next chapter coming I would like for this to continue
When's the next chapter?
Can I get two ‘f’s in chat?
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PLEASE update soon.
pwease update me like this and are excited to see what is next
Congratulations, this is my most hated story of FIM :)