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The Life Of A Parasprite.

Remember me? The first Parasprite to appear in Ponyville and taken in by the one called Fluttershy? With my grotesque eyes, horrendous smile, repugnant insect wings,repulsive blue skin, and appalling little legs that horrify millions. And this isn't even my final form! (Another story I threw together)

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Ibaconatmidnight

Ibaconatmidnight #1 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · 1 ·

Good, delightfully short, but slightly unimaginative.

shiningdark

shiningdark #2 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

Saw the ending coming the first time you mentioned their queen, but it was still entertaining to read. The idea certainly seems novel (at least to me, it seems others disagree). Some of the sentences were hard to follow, what with all the ambiguous antecedents to the pronouns ("The ponies talk for a while until they find are chased by the ponies" being a particularly bad offender). But all in all, I enjoyed it. Short, sweet, just what I am looking for when shirking homework...

Ernest Goes To Camp!

Ernest Goes To Camp! #3 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

The Life Of A Troll.

Key Lime Pie

Key Lime Pie #4 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

This was an interesting concept but I can't help but feel it could have been better executed - sometimes it feels rushed. This is a good story though, thumbing up this one ;D

Telwyn Freecolt