(PG Story) Twilight has always managed the Library to complete organization. But what happens when she finds a book that may be too inappropriate in the eyes of her friends? Maybe she'll continue to enjoy it anyway in secrecy, or at least try to anyway.
I LOVE THIS KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!
Why would I need parental guidance reading pony fan-fiction?
898190 I put that so people didn't think the novel itself was in detail, meaning it was a clean story.
Ahahahahahaha! Damn that was funny! And hey, would you like some assistance? Though the only errors I see are the dialogue. You need to make a new paragraph every time a different character talks.
898200 I'm pretty sure I did. The only time I didn't was when a character's speech went on after an action. But I'll look again.
Well, that was dry. So many chances for comedy, all wasted.
...And then Princess Celestia goes on to read it in privacy, only to be interrupted by Luna.
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898230 Oh, Waa Waa
898243 Well, you could make more, I dunno, maybe a sequel or an epilogue where she actually keeps it and goes on a complete runaway as her friends chase her and hilarity ensues. I dunno, you decide.
898274 I had to take a day out of my very busy week for this story, so I'll think about it. c:
So. . . Twilight is for banning books? I mean, yeah, not a good idea to take it on a picnic or leave it in the kids section, but I'm not sure it's a good thing for Twilight to decide what's appropriate for the whole town to have access to.
Had potential, then sort of puttered out at the end. Too bad.