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(PG Story) Twilight has always managed the Library to complete organization. But what happens when she finds a book that may be too inappropriate in the eyes of her friends? Maybe she'll continue to enjoy it anyway in secrecy, or at least try to anyway.

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I LOVE THIS KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

Why would I need parental guidance reading pony fan-fiction?

898190 I put that so people didn't think the novel itself was in detail, meaning it was a clean story.

Ahahahahahaha! Damn that was funny! :rainbowlaugh: And hey, would you like some assistance? Though the only errors I see are the dialogue. You need to make a new paragraph every time a different character talks.:twilightsmile:

898200 I'm pretty sure I did. The only time I didn't was when a character's speech went on after an action. But I'll look again.

Well, that was dry. So many chances for comedy, all wasted. :raritydespair:

...And then Princess Celestia goes on to read it in privacy, only to be interrupted by Luna. :pinkiecrazy:

898230>>898212 SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

898243 Well, you could make more, I dunno, maybe a sequel or an epilogue where she actually keeps it and goes on a complete runaway as her friends chase her and hilarity ensues.:rainbowhuh: I dunno, you decide. :twilightblush:

898274 I had to take a day out of my very busy week for this story, so I'll think about it. c:

So. . . Twilight is for banning books? I mean, yeah, not a good idea to take it on a picnic or leave it in the kids section, but I'm not sure it's a good thing for Twilight to decide what's appropriate for the whole town to have access to. :rainbowhuh:

Had potential, then sort of puttered out at the end. Too bad.

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