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Gamer Brash


Functionally autistic. Dysfunctionally artistic. Atypical Christian. Atypical brony. Go sub to my Youtube channel!

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Equestria's government has long kept secrets from the public. From damning prophecies to ancient threats, anything deemed too frightening is kept from the public. And two of Equestria's biggest secrets are about to unfold, throwing Equestria and beyond into utter calamity.
Celestia issues a state of complete pandemic. Welcome to Undead Equestria.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 22 )
Comment posted by Gamer Brash deleted Oct 27th, 2014

Please be patient with me, everypony. I have a life to attend to, and writing just the first two chapters was difficult in of itself.
Also, I promise zombies in the next chapter. No worries.
Just give me time to work. :pinkiecrazy:

Muahaha... let's see how your fic will make me tick... >:)

Interesting, XD I F&%# LOVE ❤ It.

I'm a be listening to this throughout your fic... ^_-

and in case you haven't guessed, it's me, Han. :P

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Li, you have the same profile picture as your facebook. Of course it's you. xD That, and your unmistakable mannerisms are a giveaway.

5194447
Thank you! Be careful, my ego feeds off attention!

A notice to anyone who reads it: Chapter three is in the works! You're welcome!

5196995 Darn it bro, at least try to act shocked and happy! :rainbowwild:

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...You never did tell me how my fic made you tick.
At least, so far.

Good stuff but it would be nice to see the office.

Needs more show.
It would kick up your story if you show what the main char looked like.

This is a good story with a lot of potential, I can't wait to see the zombies!:pinkiehappy:

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Only problem is: Thunder Armor ISN'T my main character.... :D

After almost a month, the third chapter is FINALLY finished! Please, provide feedback! I want to improve as a writer, if there's any grammatical errors or if the story direction is a little shaky, if there's any inconsistencies... point it out and I'll make adjustments!

So awesome! When do we get to see this mysterious main character??

5286216 Well, the mane characters will be the Mane6, the Princesses, the Undead, Discord, and of course, Queen Chrysalis.

Hey, everyone! Writing something of this size is rather difficult, so please: If there's something you feel was amateur-ish, let me know and I'll try to correct it.
I've got a lot of information to track in my daily life away from the site, so if I overlooked a key detail while writing, point it out. Constructive criticism only, please!

I was actually thinking more like Necromorphs from dead space, the sounds they made in the movies were horrifying, plus when they do swip by their target and rip out a huge chunk of flesh it is in a blur that you don't even know they were around.

Glad to see the story is up, but to bad for these guys in it.

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It's still being written. I haven't stopped.
I'm just really struggling with how to ruin Equestria without the Mane6 going all "Rainbow Power" on the Undead. It's quite a dilemma.

5296354 in every zombie apocalypse story on here, magic is useless on what's dead, so they use guns in the stories. Either guns were common and most ponies owned them (usually something like shotguns and pistols, some snipers) but in a different one I read, the equestrian military had guns in secret and only would bring them out for soldiers during war (or if your rich and you have one illegally). In a dead space one they used sharp weapons and pony-Isaac Clarke made a plasma cutter with the help of Vinyl's equipment.

My point is, do what you think is good and will turn out good, they have/had their ideas, now you do.

Good luck my friend, and if you don't want Main 6 to interfear, divide them up, kill half off at first, or write the story as your OC and maybe others point of view.

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I've been thinking that perhaps they should be weak to sharp implements and the explosive potions. In chapter three, a few did fall by the incendiary potion. It just wasn't enough to take care of the whole crowd.

5307499 well, their flesh would be weaker as it decays but they don't feel pain. If you cut off a hoof they would limp, if you cut off two they will crawl, if you cut off all four they'll just start nipping at the air trying to bite what they are hunting, if you do none of the above and slash the brain your good to go. If you want the main six to not be a problem then make it where no one knows (at first) to kill the brain. Plus, only high level explosions can kill zombies (also the incendiary are meant to burn hot enough), if you just light them up with a match and gas then you'll only make them twice as much of a problem.

The story will be good no matter what path you travel.

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