• Published 22nd Oct 2014
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The Horseman's curse - Iceclaw_Gaming

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A final edit

Hey guys, I've just went over this story again and let me tell you, there was a lot of things I messed up on, so I went over and fixed what I could see, hopefully the story is better now! :) Cheers.

Comments ( 5 )

"This end... Have I faced before, what new adventure... Lies in.. Store..." Instead of "faced" it's reached. (^_^)

6432208 I used the lines from World of Warcraft, it strongly says that. I found it interesting. The Headless Horseman is like a medival knight so his form of English is like Luna talking for example.

6432215 B-But it says right here Horseman Death
" This end have I reached before. What new adventure lies in store? " In Wowwiki. http://wowwiki.wikia.com/wiki/Headless_Horseman I know he says this firsthand because I to have done this dungeon many times, unless they changed since 90.

6432448 ah, i see now, it must have been updated to that when Pandaria launched

You might want to give it another once over. Many spelling errors that Spell Check could have caught

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