When Soarin is injured during a performance, there's only one pony cool enough to stand in for him. But nopony ever said that achieving your dreams was supposed to be easy, and before Rainbow Dash gets her chance to finally fly with the Wonderbolts she's going to need some help from an unexpected source...
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dun dun DUUUNNN!!!!!!!!
Thanks for reading!
Can't wait for more!!
Awesome fic dude. A story involving Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Spitfire, and none of them are getting shipped, ingenious. I also liked how you fit Surprise into the story, although I'd have preferred it if you had had one of the characters draw a comparison between her and Pinkie. Finally, nice reference to the horror that was G3 Rainbow Dash.
: D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
XD LOLOLOLOLOL NICE ONE JACKY
btw, whens the next one?
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The next chapter is written, but currently waiting on editing/proof-reading, so probably a few more days.
It's a real pleasure to work on this story. If you ponies are all wondering where the next chapter is, it's kinda my fault. I took Thanksgiving off and none of the other critical readers took it.
I've read and commented. It's fun. You may now blame Undercover for any further delays.
Great story keep it up
Loved the chapter, my only problem is that nopony even mentioned Fluttershy's new hairdo. Common somepony had to notice her going from hair down to her feet to a short cropped athletic style.
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Aaaah.... massive face hoof.
Yes, Rarity was originally supposed to react to that, but what with Ice Wind exploding at her, I guess I just completely forgot to actually write it.
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So are you going to edit it in?
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I may do, although it will require some thought as I'm not sure exactly how to fit it in without disrupting anything else.
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It's in now, unfortunately it's a bit of a hack job :/
Nice story. Earned a few laughs :P keep it up!
0.0 oooh
cant wait for the next chapter, letsa see what is going to happens :)
ikr
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...and you won't have to wait, because I've been editing these chapters in parallel.
Great ending, it had me laughing like you wouldn't believe. I'm happy to see such a well written fic finished and I wish you luck on your future projects.
On another note:
Not many writers can write a fic involving Rainbow, Fluttershy, and Spitfire and not have two of them shipped together. Congratulations for that as well.
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Thanks!
To quote RD herself (er... in this fic anyway): “Why does everypony seem to assume that I’m interested in absolutely everypony else?”
I prefer my fics ship-free. Honestly, after the latest episode I feel like I'm less shippy than the show itself.
Two hits. Jaw hits ground. Body hits ground. Bam! Bam!
Bene, you wrote an excellent story. Shame it's over...
:) i am happy, and the pranking part, hilarious
tis a shame its all over now
I loved every minute of this story!
Thank you all for reading, glad you enjoyed it.
Darn... It's over. Definitely a great read.
It's funny cause she gets suspended here, but in reality, that's the exact thing you would want out of someone on a stunt team. Someone who will just throw crazy stuff even when it's unnecessary. It earns fans.
That was a great little story. I am glad that I read it. It was very enjoyable and entertaining to say the least. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep up the great writing!
Wow