No matter how hard ponies try to make friends, sometimes they can't help but make enemies. Now, the Great and Powerful Trixie is gathering allies to defeat Twilight and the rest of the Elements of Harmony once and for all...
(Note: this was posted on EQD a while back, and I'm just reposting it here because I just got an account)
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Interesting, short but interesting.
The part where Gilda apologizes to Rainbow Dash seem a little contrived. Other than that it was a great story.
If Twilight and her friends plan was to try to make piece with their enemies and maybe turn them into friends, then why is Blueblood the only one receiving a punishment while the others get off scott free? If anything, Rarity just made him hate her even more. I don't know, to me, the whole making him dress up in dresses and them making him do a fashion show does seem unfair if the others don't also get a punishment. I think that making him act like a proper gentlecolt for mares from now on was good enough. Its a life long punishment but its also a way he might learn a lesson and improve himself.
I came expecting sheer goofiness, this is actually kindof cool.