• Member Since 12th Sep, 2014
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RarityLover1993


I am a community college student who lives in Danville, California. I am more into Hello Kitty than MLP, but I do like Rarity and I enjoy writing MLP fairy tales.

Comments ( 11 )

Ok, this was a nice story, but it was too fast. It would've worked better as multiple chapters. I like the small crossover idea and the Disney idea, but maybe next time, try a longer story.

This is a very interesting twist but it could use some polishing. I like it that Twilight was the fairy God Mother

4994035 I was agreeing with you.

I wonder if you'd do the original tale... but that one might be a bit too dark for today's audience

Just then, a large blue engine with a face and the number four painted on its tender pulled up at the train station. Rarity and Twilight Sparkle walked up to the locomotive. "Hello. My name is Gordon.

Wait, what? :rainbowlaugh:

That ending was kind of funny. IDK if you meant it to be. Fav'd. :rainbowlaugh:

Oh, and this needs a crossover tag for being a crossover with Cinderella and a Thomas the Tank Engine character.

HA HA HA HA HA :rainbowlaugh: cute as heck:raritywink::moustache::unsuresweetie:

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