I am a community college student who lives in Danville, California. I am more into Hello Kitty than MLP, but I do like Rarity and I enjoy writing MLP fairy tales.
Spike’s attempt at getting a kiss from Rarity with a sprig of mistletoe backfires when he gets kissed by Sweetie Belle instead. Meanwhile, Rarity thinks Twilight set it up to try and win a kiss from one of their friends. Where did it all go wrong?
All is well until, one by one, the inhabitants of Ponyville begin acting… strangely. Shaken by a terrible feeling of dread, Rarity believes she may be the only one left to save everypony from the rising darkness.
The flu, a simple annoying virus we catch every winter. Something we've come to see as common. However, this misconception will prove to be utterly false for all of Equestria, and maybe the world. For this is the story of the next great pandemic
Rarity discovers she can change into her Nightmare form at will, but she needs help to control her new power. Lucky for her, a certain dragon is there to help.
Ok, this was a nice story, but it was too fast. It would've worked better as multiple chapters. I like the small crossover idea and the Disney idea, but maybe next time, try a longer story.
Just then, a large blue engine with a face and the number four painted on its tender pulled up at the train station. Rarity and Twilight Sparkle walked up to the locomotive. "Hello. My name is Gordon.
Wait, what?
That ending was kind of funny. IDK if you meant it to be. Fav'd.
Ok, this was a nice story, but it was too fast. It would've worked better as multiple chapters. I like the small crossover idea and the Disney idea, but maybe next time, try a longer story.
Cinderarity!
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This is a very interesting twist but it could use some polishing. I like it that Twilight was the fairy God Mother
4994035 I was agreeing with you.
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I wonder if you'd do the original tale... but that one might be a bit too dark for today's audience
Wait, what?
That ending was kind of funny. IDK if you meant it to be. Fav'd.
Oh, and this needs a crossover tag for being a crossover with Cinderella and a Thomas the Tank Engine character.
HA HA HA HA HA cute as heck