Guardians, a role given to the last remnants of ponykind. Their duty, to protect the last city of their kind from hostile alien invaders. Aside from that, the Guardians are also responsible for scavenging through the abandon society of their world, finding anything that might help them return to their former glory.
Follow three Guardians on mission to reclaim loss data. Follow as they venture through a ancient ruin city, encountering many enemies along the way. On their adventure each of them will have a chance to show off their skills and unique abilities.
Warning: This story is heavily base on the Videogame Destiny. There are many things you might not get if you don't know about the lore.
Update: change name and picture.
Chapters (1)
So in this fanfic, Fallen are called Griffons and Hive are called Minotaurs?
Interesting...
Also, there's a nice piece of art on Equestria Daily which could use this story.
I hope you know this name is taken, same with the picture. I believe his name was Deep Voiced Maniac. He created the story months ago, but never finished.
U love that you make it from the game
Sorry, but looking through the first two paragraphs I can already tell it ain't that great. Trust me when I say this, just saying something does not interest the reader. You must describe the scene in great detail in order for the audience to be interested. If this story is over 5,000 words and the only thing here is just things that are said and not described, then this is a pass for me.
P.S, there is already somebody who has used this exact title, but it isn't that great either.
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Yeah, he did wrote it. But, he apparently cancelled it.
So, this story is exclusively for those that play the game? No interpretations of lore? Explanations? Descriptions?
Is this Anthro/Human/Pony? I can't tell. Most of it is dialogue. And the grammar; more specifically, the tenses used are incorrect.