My Little Pony: Love Matters Season One

by PonyIcarlyCraze

Ep. 1- Fluttershy's Love and Scootaloo's Crush

Author's Note:

Summery: Fluttershy has a crush on Rainbow Dash, but she doesn't want to admit it. What happens when the two pagesi watch the sunset, in the most beautiful place possible? Meanwhile, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle aren't just teased in the schoolyard anymore, but the whole town!

Rainbow Dash finally arrived at the Ponyville train station. She had almost missed saying goodbye to two of her best friends! The Apple Family was moving to Manehatten, where they had bought a new farm, and Rarity was going with them.

"Sorry I'm late, girls. Derpy cleared too many clouds again." Rainbow said.

"It's quite alright, darling." Rarity replied in her usual posh accent. "Isn't that right, dear?" she said to her marefriend. Applejack just nodded her head. Everypony bid them goodbye, promised to stay in touch, then went of on there way.

Oh.... Oh... Oh...
If friendship is magic, Isn't love stronger?
I can't take this feeing any longer
I'll starve to death to save my friends
but one most of all
Love Matters, by the light of day
Love Matters, in every way!
Love Matters, don't know what to say
Love Matters, hey!
friendship might be better then anything to you
but love matters more to me!
Love Matters, by the light of day
Love Matters, in every way!
Love Matters, don't know what to say
Love Matters, hey!

"So... Rainbow Dash?." Fluttershy said blushing, "Y- you w- wanna go to Sh- shugercube Corner?" Rainbow was stumped. When did Fluttershy get so nervous around her?

"O kay..." she replied. When they got to Shugercube Corner, Pinkie Pie bounced up to them.

"What can I get ya, hu hu hu?! We have cookies and cakes and we have a new hay cake. Oh, and chocolate pie, to!" she said in one breath.

"Um... we'll just have two chocolate sundaes, please." Fluttershy ordered. In what seemed like seconds, Pinkie brought the two sundaes. One had chocolate ice cream with caramel sauce. The other had vanilla ice cream with chocolate sauce and nuts. They ate there ice cream is silence.

Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy where out in the fields, watching the sunset. 'Time for me to make my move.' Fluttershy thought. "I- I love you." Fluttershy said.

"What?" Rainbow said, confused. Fluttershy had no choice. She kissed Rainbow Dash, right then and there. She slowly pulled away. Rainbow stood there with a shocked expression on her face. Fluttershy ran away, crying.

Rainbow Dash woke up in the field next to a tear-stained Fluttershy. With out thinking, RD kissed her. Right then and there.

"I love you, to." Rainbow finally replied. A giant smile appeared on Fluttershy's face.

"Will you be my marefriend? she said.

"I would love to." Rainbow said.

Holding hooves, the two lovers trotted through town. They got weird looks on the street. They heard mumbling about those 'stupid tartarus-bound homosexuals', but they didn't mind one bit.

"Rainbow Dash?" the pegesi turned around to see Scootaloo.

"My mom says you're a bad influence on me." Rainbow panicked. Scootaloo was like a little sister to her! Being a bad pony in her parent's eyes was, really, truly, THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!

"Why?" she asked.

"Because I think I like Sweetie Belle." Scootaloo replied. Sweetie Belle had moved back in with her parents because she didn't want to move.

"Ask her on a casual little get-together, then confess your feelings at the end. It worked for me and Dashie." Fluttershy interrupted.

"I'll do that." Scootaloo said, zooming off on her scooter.

Scootaloo knocked on Sweetie Belle's door. Rarity's mother, Country Dimond, opened the door.

"Mrs. Dimond, can Sweetie come and hang out?" she asked.

"Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo's at the door!" Country yelled.

"Hi, Scoots!" Sweetie Bells said.

"Hi, Belle." Scootaloo awnsered. First they tried for cheese-making cutie marks, dog grooming cutie marks, and grasshopper catching cutie marks.

"I'm tired out" Sweetie Belle stated.

"You- you wanna go see the sunset or something?" Scootaloo asked.

"Scootaloo Lightning Flash, are you asking me out on a date?" Sweetie asked.

"Sort of..." Scoots said.

"Then I accept." she said

"So, you're like, dating now?" Dimond Tiara asked.

"Yep!" Sweetie said. The whole class burst into laughter. Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle's show and tell had been there boost up from friends to fillyfriends.

"Don't go kissing at recess, or we'll all puke!" one colt said.

"You- you don't like us anymore?" Sweetie said, crying.

"Shhh, Sweets. It's gonna be just fine. Applebloom, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash already approve of us. There opinions are all we need." Scootaloo said, calming down her love. Sweetie Belle just hiccupped.

"Stop it right now! These are ceragous fillies for getting together in the first place!" Miss Cherilee said.

Hooves in Hooves, by Sweetie Belle Sweetie Belle read.

Scoo- scootaloo, Scoo, Scootaloo
You are the light of my day
The reason for my ways
I don't care what you say
I love you
and Hooves in Hooves
I will lead you to your fantasy
Every night, every day,
I will be there for you dear
with you, do you hear?
I will always be with you
that is the way
I don't care what you say
I love you
and Hooves in Hooves
I will lead you to your fantasy
you are my night
you are my day
and I will be with you all the way
that's what I'll say
you are my words and my way
the ways that I do things
I don't care what you say
I love you
and Hooves in Hooves
I will lead you to your fantasy once she finished singing, Scootaloo clapped her hooves.

"Man, I love you Sweetie Belle!" she said. Sweetie Belle hugged her. She couldn't ask for a better fillyfriend.

Comments

[PoniesAndGames]

..... What? That fast?

[dream1990]

i like it and i hope they going to be more episodes chapters for this story

[Spider8ite]

That was pretty fast. Anyways, I like it, I'll be favoriting. But I hope you make longer chapters, then I would love it! Anyways, I'm waiting for the next!

~Spectrum Shine

[UfUnNyF1r3nd]

......i dont get it......

[There At The Close]

Yeah, Longer chapters=more of my intrest. Still, I'm going to track this anyways, and Iftou ever need help, feel free to ask.
~Wywint

[Starguy135]

Shugercube Corner

Sugercube Corner

ceragous

courageous
Could be a good story but as everyone else said you're moving too fast. Slow down a bit and try to describe things more. I'll follow to see what happens next.

[FlutterDashTableThrower]

.... I know Dash is a speed demon... but this is ridiculous. Seriously, slow it down. I'll track it cause it has potential, but... don't rush it... I think we all can agree the first chapter needs a rewrite. Better descriptions, a slower pace, longer chapters etc. I can't get into and enjoy something if it's over before I even blink can I?

The characterization is somewhat decent, and I love how Rainbow actually dared let herself pull a Rarity. That actually got a laugh out loud. I can't up vote this yet for obvious reasons, but I'll watch closely to see if you take any of this advice to heart.

[thechicken95]

It's still far too rushed, not enough detail and not really that much of a conflict for this to be really considered a story.

[deadpansnarker]

Looks like this supposedly 25 episode season got cancelled early. No big loss, to be fair...