Babs seed, a young transcolt (FtM in human terms) remembers his story, as he walks through the pathways of his foalhood. His memories bring on a realization. One that is simply obvious, in hindsight.
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Your story is all over the place and needs more focus. I guess it's not the worst thing I've ever read.
4895077 Oh....well, could you be a tad more specific? Like.....I can't quite improve that way....
This is a rather heartwarming story. I would have appreciated a bit more conflict, whether it would be Bab struggling with writing or somepony's ignorance being evident— but in spite of that, the tranquility is rather refreshing to read. I enjoyed quite a bit.
4896298 Thank you! Do you wanna garner a guess at what song I was hearing as I wrote this? You could win the amazing prize of hearing you're correct!
4896305
I'm afraid I don't have a clue. My apologies
You're most welcome.
4896312 Oh right, it probably was translated. Don't worry about it. Someone will probably guess it, soon enough.
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Indeed! Let's hope for resolution
Can you please capitalize the first letters of "Endless", "Circle", and "Life" in your title?
4944694 I have done it, thank you for the reminder, I didn't realize it wasn't capitalized
This was awesome!
Wish I'd knew what song you were listening to, tho..