Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity brave the last minute shopping crowds of Manehatten to get the Cutie Mark Crusaders the perfect gifts for Hearth's Warming Eve.
Sometimes things just don't work out.
Just a gal writing about gals bein pals
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Good to see this finally making the light of day. February really is a terrible time to write Christmas fic.
Very nice and fluffy fic. I like how everything turned out alright in the end.
Beautiful story, lovely lesson, lots of feels for our ponies being who they are...and a happy ending! Who could ask for more?
Ah, I needed some fluff for christmastime.
.... I needed this.
A very cute fluffy Christmas story 4 outta 5 stars. I took the fifth star for having the gifts in with Santas gift I think it detracts from the meaning of the gift. Still great story an love the style
Nice little Hearth's Warming story you got here. I sort of saw where it was going mid-way through but it was still a fun read all the same.
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Gah I really dislike the whole Santa clause is real tropd in holiday stories or movies. And ysy comsumerism !! Ho Ho Ho
This was incredibly cute! Great job! I may read this to my family next Christmas!
7465306 I think you mean "Capitalism, ho (ho ho)!"
Cute little read. In Rainbow's shoes I wouldn't have just left those kids though. She should call the authorities and have them taken to an orphanage, so they don't freeze or keep living through thievery.
The story was simple, but the ending was a surprise, and a lot more plausible in a place like Equestria. Thanks for sharing.
Sherlock Holmes is real!
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Cute story. Didn't see Santa Claus was real coming, but I enjoy a happy ending, so you won't get any complaints out of me.
I'd question the legality of the city just taking Orange's stuff. And if the Apple family let the deed lapse that was incredibly negligent on their part.
That being said, I liked Applejack hanging with Babs or Rarity talking another mare through her relationship troubles.
Rainbow Dash's consideration first towards Scootaloo and then towards those kids was really well done. All really super sweet nice humanizing moments in my book.
Like I said, sweet story. I'm glad I got to read it.