Fun stuff as usual, I can't really place why but the beginning of this chapter seems awkward. Until Twi and Aj leave the restaurant I just have trouble picturing the scene in my head.
129341 To be honest, Vortex, that problem is unfixable because I'm not sure if there IS a fine-dining restaraunt in Ponyville and the details of what it's like are very much not what the chapter is about. Anything I could say about that place is almost guaranteed to be glaringly non-canon... so pay no attention to the chef-pony behind the curtain, except that it is Anthony Bourdain, who is a brony after my own heart (love your books, Tony! You're a true writer, your cutie mark is a pen not a chef's toque!) And he was mad at the waiter because if you don't tell the chef you hate the pony equivalent of fugu-fish, he can't decide not to make it for you...
130031. I'm not too sure you should be worrying about being non canon at this point but I do think leaving the beginning to imagination was a fine choice. Took me a whip to realize that it started before the end of the previous chapter but I figured it out early enough and it wasn't really. Ital except to explain why it dissapeard. Kind of wish you would have done something more with sash looking for the missing bit but oh well it was still a great chapter.
You'd think Twilight, being the walking encyclopedia that everypony makes her out to be, would know that's how lavender is planted. I mean heck, I REALLY don't like gardening, but even I knew that! Also, did you know roses grow better and smell sweeter when they've been planted next to garlic? No joke, that happens, weird huh?
It seems a bit 'scumbaggy' that AJ has promised to not leave Rainbow and is sleeping around, but then doesn't explain to Fluttershy or Twilight that she doesn't want a real relationship with them. Where the hell do you draw the line? It's like RD and AJ want to be monogamous but also want to sleep around. Real scumbag move to not fully explain their intentions to Twi and Fluttershy.
That aside, I think I'm getting a clearer picture of how relationships work in Equestria, with all the stuff about having a 'claim' on someone, etc. It's interesting.
Yeah, this kind of cements my preference of Pegasi over Unicorns. I'd rather love soft and feathery wings instead of getting my head blown off by magical cum. Wonderful chapter again.
You know I always liked the thought that I have read in a lot of stories on this and other mlp story sites that a unicorn's horn magic ejactulating into your mouth during an orgasm will be even better and sweeter to drink than female cum and not be strong to hurt you like you suggested in this story. I think instead of it being dangerous like you have it in this story, I would instead rather enjoy reading that sucking a unicorn horn makes them orgasm and the magic released is very special in that only ponies they really love ever get to taste it and in addition of tasting very good it gives you special powers for a little while. I also kind of dislike the idea that getting hit with or drinking unicorn magic ejaculation makes the unicorn clingy as I have never seen this idea anywhere else and it seems kind of racial and unfair towards unicorns.
Five stars!
Luncheon.
My ceiling has burn marks.
Fun stuff as usual, I can't really place why but the beginning of this chapter seems awkward. Until Twi and Aj leave the restaurant I just have trouble picturing the scene in my head.
omegeh unicorns are ducktape(they both are magic and work as an adhesive)
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To be honest, Vortex, that problem is unfixable because I'm not sure if there IS a fine-dining restaraunt in Ponyville and the details of what it's like are very much not what the chapter is about. Anything I could say about that place is almost guaranteed to be glaringly non-canon... so pay no attention to the chef-pony behind the curtain, except that it is Anthony Bourdain, who is a brony after my own heart (love your books, Tony! You're a true writer, your cutie mark is a pen not a chef's toque!)
And he was mad at the waiter because if you don't tell the chef you hate the pony equivalent of fugu-fish, he can't decide not to make it for you...
130031. I'm not too sure you should be worrying about being non canon at this point but I do think leaving the beginning to imagination was a fine choice. Took me a whip to realize that it started before the end of the previous chapter but I figured it out early enough and it wasn't really. Ital except to explain why it dissapeard. Kind of wish you would have done something more with sash looking for the missing bit but oh well it was still a great chapter.
Hornjob
Death by magicgasm
Oh god, when Applejack said the alfalfa tasted off, I had flashbacks of Cupcakes. So wrong...so very, very wrong...
You'd think Twilight, being the walking encyclopedia that everypony makes her out to be, would know that's how lavender is planted. I mean heck, I REALLY don't like gardening, but even I knew that! Also, did you know roses grow better and smell sweeter when they've been planted next to garlic? No joke, that happens, weird huh?
It seems a bit 'scumbaggy' that AJ has promised to not leave Rainbow and is sleeping around, but then doesn't explain to Fluttershy or Twilight that she doesn't want a real relationship with them. Where the hell do you draw the line? It's like RD and AJ want to be monogamous but also want to sleep around. Real scumbag move to not fully explain their intentions to Twi and Fluttershy.
That aside, I think I'm getting a clearer picture of how relationships work in Equestria, with all the stuff about having a 'claim' on someone, etc. It's interesting.
And now we got ejactulating unicorns! About time!
So as far as monogamy goes, that's out the window. However, it would seem that there are two distinct signs.
Pegasi; wing fondling/petting.
Unicorns; magic ejactulating.
Seems solid enough for me. Wonder what the Earth Pony sign of true devotion is...
I'm surprised you didn't do anything with "I'll eat anything that won't eat me back". The innuendo seemed pretty obvious
Anyway, good chapter. I only recently got around to reading this fic, but I'm quite enjoying it
Yeah, this kind of cements my preference of Pegasi over Unicorns. I'd rather love soft and feathery wings instead of getting my head blown off by magical cum. Wonderful chapter again.
3035189 I already would have preffered to be a unicorn but this story made me into a unicorn with a wing fetish.
Hell of a way to go...
I'm lovin' it
You know I always liked the thought that I have read in a lot of stories on this and other mlp story sites that a unicorn's horn magic ejactulating into your mouth during an orgasm will be even better and sweeter to drink than female cum and not be strong to hurt you like you suggested in this story. I think instead of it being dangerous like you have it in this story, I would instead rather enjoy reading that sucking a unicorn horn makes them orgasm and the magic released is very special in that only ponies they really love ever get to taste it and in addition of tasting very good it gives you special powers for a little while. I also kind of dislike the idea that getting hit with or drinking unicorn magic ejaculation makes the unicorn clingy as I have never seen this idea anywhere else and it seems kind of racial and unfair towards unicorns.