263904 Oh, yeah? I'd say that wording is actually rather fitting this fic. Though I do have to agree, we're reaching if not an endpoint then at least another midpoint. Sad really, considering this is such an awesome fic, but I guess even good things much come to an end.
Trixie is topping from the bottom in the most astounding way. The way you write this, I can feel the unearthly, almost unimaginable intelligence of Trixie as she causes reality itself to conform around her fantasy and need. And best of all, I cannot even be certain she herself is entirely aware of the process.
264868 Thank you- it means more than you know to get a few kind words. They've changed things so I can't bounce up into that 'popular stories' list anymore- I don't know how or why- so it looks like I finish tellin' this story to just y'all here, and as much as I love you that still breaks my heart
If you know me at all you'll know I will not give up, and I will finish the story just as I intended, even if there was just ONE pony left who wanted to read it. I think you'll find that Trixie continues to surprise you- it may not look like it, but Twi is a good influence on her, and that is something Trixie may need to live up to, sooner than you think. She is wiser than it appears, just a very strange pony, and her heart is good- when allowed to bloom.
Thank y'all for allowin' the same of mine.
And I'm gonna stick to the 'please don't go whippin' this fic on folks who can't abide clop', but it DOES matter to me that those who would like it, find out about it. I just don't know how to do that other than write more. An' that I have been doin', hopefully to good effect.
I can't believe myself. I just skipped over the clopping side of the story to read the plot, well scan read it, enough to get what was happening.
So definitely keep up the good work! Because I love it.
Also on a side note, screw Cannon characters. I like your Twilight that crazy, and Spike being more sarcastic then normal, and every pony just the way they are in this story. Works really well.
hey Applejinx! I have to say this is an AMAZINGLY well done story and, I'm terrible with words but I made an account just so I could comment on your very well done story and I for one am greatly anticipating the next chapter to come! of all the fanfics I have read as of now, yours is the best in my opinion and all I can say is keep up the creativity!!! and I love the insane complexity of the whole situation and the depth that you have put into the characters design
234702 yes but you have to remember that a lot of women are insane, especially people who wayyyy over think things, Twilight is a prime example, gets her mind going and its just like a runaway freight train, nothing is gonna stop it, besides Celestia of course!
Friendship doesn't last forever, unless its strong. It seems that this friendship is beginning to falter. And what's with the sobs whenever someone says Fluttershy's name?
Quoth the dragon: "This isn't going to end well."
Welp, I think we're building to our clim-
Er, poor choice of words.
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Oh, yeah? I'd say that wording is actually rather fitting this fic. Though I do have to agree, we're reaching if not an endpoint then at least another midpoint. Sad really, considering this is such an awesome fic, but I guess even good things much come to an end.
this will be good :3
Trixie is topping from the bottom in the most astounding way. The way you write this, I can feel the unearthly, almost unimaginable intelligence of Trixie as she causes reality itself to conform around her fantasy and need. And best of all, I cannot even be certain she herself is entirely aware of the process.
I am constantly being surprised by this story.
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Quote the Dash: Oh horseapples.
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Thank you- it means more than you know to get a few kind words. They've changed things so I can't bounce up into that 'popular stories' list anymore- I don't know how or why- so it looks like I finish tellin' this story to just y'all here, and as much as I love you that still breaks my heart
If you know me at all you'll know I will not give up, and I will finish the story just as I intended, even if there was just ONE pony left who wanted to read it. I think you'll find that Trixie continues to surprise you- it may not look like it, but Twi is a good influence on her, and that is something Trixie may need to live up to, sooner than you think. She is wiser than it appears, just a very strange pony, and her heart is good- when allowed to bloom.
Thank y'all for allowin' the same of mine.
And I'm gonna stick to the 'please don't go whippin' this fic on folks who can't abide clop', but it DOES matter to me that those who would like it, find out about it. I just don't know how to do that other than write more. An' that I have been doin', hopefully to good effect.
I can't believe myself. I just skipped over the clopping side of the story to read the plot, well scan read it, enough to get what was happening.
So definitely keep up the good work! Because I love it.
Also on a side note, screw Cannon characters. I like your Twilight that crazy, and Spike being more sarcastic then normal, and every pony just the way they are in this story. Works really well.
hey Applejinx! I have to say this is an AMAZINGLY well done story and, I'm terrible with words but I made an account just so I could comment on your very well done story and I for one am greatly anticipating the next chapter to come! of all the fanfics I have read as of now, yours is the best in my opinion and all I can say is keep up the creativity!!! and I love the insane complexity of the whole situation and the depth that you have put into the characters design
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*raises wine glass and adjusts monocle* indeed
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yes but you have to remember that a lot of women are insane, especially people who wayyyy over think things, Twilight is a prime example, gets her mind going and its just like a runaway freight train, nothing is gonna stop it, besides Celestia of course!
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Oh, you have NO idea.... brace for incoming chapter, in 3... 2... 1...
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Like Haruhi Suzumiya? Good Lord, there's a frightening thought.
And the bar has been raised again. Great Chapter.
I'm going to retract my last comment about Twi breaking Trixie's brain. She down pulled it out and rehashed it before pressing reset!
Seriously though, it seems that Twi would make a good psychologist after this whole mess with Trixie.
And I wonder how AJ/RD are gonna explain the missing bit...
Sh!t is about to go DOWN
Oh no...things are getting very bad now. Applejack, be careful with Twi, she might go insane...well, more insane.
Friendship doesn't last forever, unless its strong. It seems that this friendship is beginning to falter. And what's with the sobs whenever someone says Fluttershy's name?