The hell is up with porno and cervixes? Cervixes are not happy fun places. They are unhappy discomfort places for everyone involved. At least it was a tongue this time (as bizarre as that is) but its usually cock and that's just... No.
I am rather confused by Pinkie. She feels somewhat off, and, at the same time, spot on. Rather, she feels forced--almost too awkward--yet behaves with the same intentions that the real Pinkie would, though not nearly the proper flare. I have been banging my head backward against the wall behind me as I watch Pinkie and Rainbow Dash argue over Applejack as though she isn't there. Pinkie has her desires, and cares about her friends, but it frustrates me to no end that she keeps blaming rainbow dash for everything, and Rainbow dash just goes along with it like she knows she screwed up and doesn't even care. It's like she doesn't even like Applejack. All of this just feels so forced, and if it doesn't get better in the next chapter I'm going to put this down and skip to Dashie's foaling.
A bit of nitpicking on my part. I've always seen Pinkie as mostly bisexual, however you've written her as completely homosexual. I disagree with this, but only on a personal level.
OH MY GOD WE'RE DOOMED!
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Die happy. (an' exhausted)
I had no idea what the hell was going on half the time and the characterization was screwed up, but hey, futa ponies!
Futa ponies, what is this I don't even.
Yay, someone used an Idea I made...I'm so happy...
That was hawt.
That. Was. HILARIOUS
The smut's pretty alright but the dialogue and everything else just makes me whaaaaaaaaat?
And there are 19 more chapters and two more stories in this series?! I've hit the motherload.
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Agreed
This was great.
First I was mad at Dash--like AJ--for the apparent cheating, but once Pinkke started going at it...
And who knew Pinkie's tounge worked like that? If she only wasn't 100% fillyfooler...
Nice touch with the safe-word there.
But I must ask, what the buck did Dashie do to Pinkie that caused AJ's massive mare-gasm?
The hell is up with porno and cervixes? Cervixes are not happy fun places. They are unhappy discomfort places for everyone involved. At least it was a tongue this time (as bizarre as that is) but its usually cock and that's just... No.
I am rather confused by Pinkie. She feels somewhat off, and, at the same time, spot on. Rather, she feels forced--almost too awkward--yet behaves with the same intentions that the real Pinkie would, though not nearly the proper flare. I have been banging my head backward against the wall behind me as I watch Pinkie and Rainbow Dash argue over Applejack as though she isn't there. Pinkie has her desires, and cares about her friends, but it frustrates me to no end that she keeps blaming rainbow dash for everything, and Rainbow dash just goes along with it like she knows she screwed up and doesn't even care. It's like she doesn't even like Applejack. All of this just feels so forced, and if it doesn't get better in the next chapter I'm going to put this down and skip to Dashie's foaling.
A bit of nitpicking on my part. I've always seen Pinkie as mostly bisexual, however you've written her as completely homosexual. I disagree with this, but only on a personal level.
Now I feel even more lost. I'm loving the clop, I'm just having a kind of hard time following all of this. Oh, well, next chapter!
This is going to sound weird, but what does line “And you… call yourself… a vegetarian!” mean?
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She ate pony something FIERCE