WTF did i just read... read one chapter then started on the second... then i thought... 'what the fuck am I reading? WTF IS WRONG WITH ME!!! IS THIS WHERE MY LIFE IS HEADED!!!!' ... i died a little on the inside..... still have bruises on my head from me smacking it against my desk repeatedly..... can't believe I just read a chapter of that.... i am so disappointed in myself...... i can never look at ponies the same way now.....
AAAaaaaannny way. hmm now im curious as to what this "reoccuring problem" entails. I hope this gets even better. :) haha sorry i saw that "comment with more than 20 emotes will have them stripped warning and i couldn't resit :D
Another successful chapter! Though. . . after the whole Rarity incident you didn't really have to put in the clop scene in the woods, since it didn't really move the plot in anyway . . . Unless the point was to bridge it to Celestia's involvement? Oh, you clever writer, you.
This IS a clopfic. I was gonna say to 57505 that I'm real unworried about graphic sex but AM disturbed by graphic violence... so there's a lot of stuff out there which would societally be considered jes' fine that I find just as worrying as he finds my fic. He should skip a chapter, next chapter will only be more alarming to him, trust me on this one. But yes, every chapter will have sex because this is a clopfic and the story is being told through these experiences. Some of the updates are nearly ten thousand words- there's room for it.
And the scene in the woods moved the plot for Applejack, in that she felt understood by Rarity and swung more openly in her 'girly' direction (in public, sort of!). Be aware there's a lot going on behind the scenes- Applejack gaining loyalty to Rarity for that, matters. It also had to happen because Dash got seriously insulted and rebuffed by Rarity and if she didn't get to blow off some steam, she wouldn't just be distracted, she'd be vindictive... Applejack wouldn't let her get too cranky, she 'herds cranky ponies' in more ways than one.
Don't assume that Celestia created this magic item just because she is prepared to observe it out there wreaking mischief. There might be many magic items she's aware of- she steps in when stuff REALLY gets off the hook, like in Lesson Zero, which could have become incredibly disruptive in a way the ponies could not possibly have dealt with on their own. Trixie's Magic Bit doesn't have that power, it's just a wildcard and clearly has stuff going on that we have NOT seen yet (yes, this is plotted that far ahead)
58507 I'm sure its a good story ... but clopfics arent my thing I was reading the first chapter drunk and I was laughing at first... skipped a few of the sex scenes by skipping a few paragraphs just lightly reading over it... couldnt stop laughing at how big a perv trixy was....
then I thought about what i was reading and THE IMAGES!!! O GAWD THE IMAGES IN MY HEAD!!!!! sober or not im disapointed in myself..... I like violence in the story only as long as the character doesnt die.. don't really care if they kill off a pony as long its not the mane6 big mac luna or celestia etc....
though this seems like a good story the "scenes" are a bit to much for me sorry to say
Ending was priceless. And I was wondering when Rarity would make an appearance in this. Big shocker that she didn't want "AppleSack" or "Rainbow Cock". NOT. When AJ tells it like it is, she tells truth!
And that banter with Celestia and Luna, I laughed at how you were able to keep Luna's 'Olde Timey' speech. Bravo.
I just realized; AJ took RD up there so Celestia COULD spy on them--like RD mistakenly hinted at near the beginning! You clever, clever fiend!
No words will ever suffice so I'll post this:
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The bit belongs to HER!!!!
i like celestia speech!!!
and uhm you cried to this?
wow what a faggot.
Srs.
Just joking, cool read.
WTF did i just read... read one chapter then started on the second... then i thought... 'what the fuck am I reading? WTF IS WRONG WITH ME!!! IS THIS WHERE MY LIFE IS HEADED!!!!' ... i died a little on the inside..... still have bruises on my head from me smacking it against my desk repeatedly..... can't believe I just read a chapter of that.... i am so disappointed in myself...... i can never look at ponies the same way now.....
AAAaaaaannny way. hmm now im curious as to what this "reoccuring problem" entails. I hope this gets even better. :) haha sorry i saw that "comment with more than 20 emotes will have them stripped warning and i couldn't resit :D
Beautiful and adorable as always. I grinned like a fool the whole way through.
57208 Wow, that is an amazing gif.
Another successful chapter! Though. . . after the whole Rarity incident you didn't really have to put in the clop scene in the woods, since it didn't really move the plot in anyway . . . Unless the point was to bridge it to Celestia's involvement? Oh, you clever writer, you.
This IS a clopfic. I was gonna say to 57505 that I'm real unworried about graphic sex but AM disturbed by graphic violence... so there's a lot of stuff out there which would societally be considered jes' fine that I find just as worrying as he finds my fic. He should skip a chapter, next chapter will only be more alarming to him, trust me on this one. But yes, every chapter will have sex because this is a clopfic and the story is being told through these experiences. Some of the updates are nearly ten thousand words- there's room for it.
And the scene in the woods moved the plot for Applejack, in that she felt understood by Rarity and swung more openly in her 'girly' direction (in public, sort of!). Be aware there's a lot going on behind the scenes- Applejack gaining loyalty to Rarity for that, matters. It also had to happen because Dash got seriously insulted and rebuffed by Rarity and if she didn't get to blow off some steam, she wouldn't just be distracted, she'd be vindictive... Applejack wouldn't let her get too cranky, she 'herds cranky ponies' in more ways than one.
Don't assume that Celestia created this magic item just because she is prepared to observe it out there wreaking mischief. There might be many magic items she's aware of- she steps in when stuff REALLY gets off the hook, like in Lesson Zero, which could have become incredibly disruptive in a way the ponies could not possibly have dealt with on their own. Trixie's Magic Bit doesn't have that power, it's just a wildcard and clearly has stuff going on that we have NOT seen yet (yes, this is plotted that far ahead)
58507
I'm sure its a good story ... but clopfics arent my thing I was reading the first chapter drunk and I was laughing at first... skipped a few of the sex scenes by skipping a few paragraphs just lightly reading over it... couldnt stop laughing at how big a perv trixy was....
then I thought about what i was reading and THE IMAGES!!! O GAWD THE IMAGES IN MY HEAD!!!!! sober or not im disapointed in myself..... I like violence in the story only as long as the character doesnt die.. don't really care if they kill off a pony as long its not the mane6 big mac luna or celestia etc....
though this seems like a good story the "scenes" are a bit to much for me sorry to say
Wait, wait... recurring... problem... with it?
I like this story. I'm not sure why I like it since I'm usually not a big fan of clopfics. But hey who cares, PONIES! HUZZAH!
Princess Molestia strikes again!
57405 No, it belongs to Trixie, I made the mistake of reading the sequel first.
58274 Actually it's thirty now. Keep posting.
Eenope, Rainbow is still acting the same as ever. Oblivious and insensitive.
Ending was priceless. And I was wondering when Rarity would make an appearance in this. Big shocker that she didn't want "AppleSack" or "Rainbow Cock". NOT. When AJ tells it like it is, she tells truth!
And that banter with Celestia and Luna, I laughed at how you were able to keep Luna's 'Olde Timey' speech. Bravo.
I just realized; AJ took RD up there so Celestia COULD spy on them--like RD mistakenly hinted at near the beginning!
You clever, clever fiend!
Wow, Dash got right to the point with Rarity. They were pretty amazing in this chapter. And Celestia, you peeping princess you...
Molestia strikes again