151629 I'll keep an eye on 'em. Twilight's difficult that way when she's out to get somethin' and isn't sure how she'll be able to go about it. Not quite like Dashie's ruthless gettin' to the point.
151825 Courage. These are still ponies. They will cut through th' grimdark like a buzz-saw by their very natures- though they might be up against a fearfully complicated situation.
this.......IS AWESOME, TS is one of my favs, and this pissy, yet determined fits her somehow, i dont know, im pretty sure theres no canon reference for it, but to me it seems right :twilightsmile however, MOAR
Why was this chapter so damn good? I don't know honestly. I don't know what was so amazing about it. But to me, this was just great writing. GREAT writing right here.
Yay for the bit coming back soon.
...... Damn, I have nothing else to say. I'm sorry, I've been reading fics and commenting on them non-stop for almost 4 hours, I just need to stop now. I can't get anything else out.....
Remember how I said I was worried about Twilight? This is exactly what I was afraid of...
Also how come nopony seems to care too much about the ponies who have have died before? Twilight seems to be more interested in the recreation of the bit, and the others have just left after the bit disappeared without any comment on that. I wonder if this will come back later.
153020 Honestly, I don't think they can quite grasp that. It's by far the most un-pony thing they confront and I daresay has a lot to do with why Trixie's so messed up- she was in an unthinkably horrible bind because due to the curse, she had to respond just to prevent death, and having semidirectly caused deaths as a pony is beyond what she can really cope with.
It was more a peek at the abyss rather than a thing the fic is going to explore in depth. My take is that none of the ponies, including those in the towns she was previously in, have much of a framework for dealing with that. There are no police forces seeking to bring Trixie to justice.
...gosh, Celestia is more hands-off than I thought. Maybe she herself isn't entirely up to speed and has only seen Trixie running out of town repeatedly.
Yeah I'm curious as to what happened to celestia... Also this chapter was indeed one of our best ones and this story is really good. Your writing style transcends most clop fics that have little character development or plot and instead makes a very interesting story while still being sexy. Even the scene with pinkie lura and Bon Bon wasn't just mindless sex and instead developed the characters at the Sam time. Great work!
1387020 Be afraid, be very afraid. She kind of is- most definitely is. Twilight wants her stallion back. 'He' done her too good, and now she's lost herself to it. And this will not end well
Wow, I am now far more pleased with this story than I was at the beginning. I thought it was going to be a pretty straight-up "clop all the ponies" kind of story with very minimal plot, but now I was just slapped with a big, thick, juicy plot twist. I can't wait to see how that goes!
They have gotten Twilight hooked on sex like it is a drug, and now that the bit is gone or has temporarily disappeared, Twilight has gone crazy from withdrawn. Quick, find a strong stallion who isn't gay that can rut Twilight back to normal.
Called it. If there's one thing about this story, it's that the characters talk to much in circles, but whatever.
151629
I'll keep an eye on 'em. Twilight's difficult that way when she's out to get somethin' and isn't sure how she'll be able to go about it. Not quite like Dashie's ruthless gettin' to the point.
This isn't going to end well.
151825
Courage. These are still ponies. They will cut through th' grimdark like a buzz-saw by their very natures- though they might be up against a fearfully complicated situation.
Aye-aye, Boss!
Private Pansy, full speed ahead!
Time to sit back and enjoy the reading.
Scary Twilight is 'effin AKIRA scary. She's Darth Twilight now.
Dick has turned her into a real dick.
this.......IS AWESOME, TS is one of my favs, and this pissy, yet determined fits her somehow, i dont know, im pretty sure theres no canon reference for it, but to me it seems right :twilightsmile however, MOAR
Why was this chapter so damn good? I don't know honestly. I don't know what was so amazing about it. But to me, this was just great writing. GREAT writing right here.
Yay for the bit coming back soon.
...... Damn, I have nothing else to say. I'm sorry, I've been reading fics and commenting on them non-stop for almost 4 hours, I just need to stop now. I can't get anything else out.....
Remember how I said I was worried about Twilight? This is exactly what I was afraid of...
Also how come nopony seems to care too much about the ponies who have have died before? Twilight seems to be more interested in the recreation of the bit, and the others have just left after the bit disappeared without any comment on that. I wonder if this will come back later.
153020
Honestly, I don't think they can quite grasp that. It's by far the most un-pony thing they confront and I daresay has a lot to do with why Trixie's so messed up- she was in an unthinkably horrible bind because due to the curse, she had to respond just to prevent death, and having semidirectly caused deaths as a pony is beyond what she can really cope with.
It was more a peek at the abyss rather than a thing the fic is going to explore in depth. My take is that none of the ponies, including those in the towns she was previously in, have much of a framework for dealing with that. There are no police forces seeking to bring Trixie to justice.
...gosh, Celestia is more hands-off than I thought. Maybe she herself isn't entirely up to speed and has only seen Trixie running out of town repeatedly.
Yeah I'm curious as to what happened to celestia... Also this chapter was indeed one of our best ones and this story is really good. Your writing style transcends most clop fics that have little character development or plot and instead makes a very interesting story while still being sexy. Even the scene with pinkie lura and Bon Bon wasn't just mindless sex and instead developed the characters at the Sam time. Great work!
Two words:
Oh.
Buck.
Wow... um... This seems so out of character!
Is Twilight going insane?
1387020
Be afraid, be very afraid. She kind of is- most definitely is.
Twilight wants her stallion back. 'He' done her too good, and now she's lost herself to it. And this will not end well
Hmm. So Twilight isn't depressed that AJ is being a scumbag, she's just lost her mind because AJ can no longer summon a penis. Ok then.
Duhn duhn DUUUUHHH!
-kills drama music-
Suspencful! Go Twi!
Wow, I am now far more pleased with this story than I was at the beginning. I thought it was going to be a pretty straight-up "clop all the ponies" kind of story with very minimal plot, but now I was just slapped with a big, thick, juicy plot twist. I can't wait to see how that goes!
They have gotten Twilight hooked on sex like it is a drug, and now that the bit is gone or has temporarily disappeared, Twilight has gone crazy from withdrawn. Quick, find a strong stallion who isn't gay that can rut Twilight back to normal.
Ooo, ominous!