Uh... am I supposed to be deletin' paraspritey comments here? I don't mean to be uncharitable about it, but that ain't really what this page is about, and it hurts the feelin's of the ones who are enjoyin' themselves to sass on them that bad. I don't go around lookin' up fics that I don't like and givin' em lip. What do?
I think let them be. I kinda feel like it too - wtf i'm reading? Why my strong and proud Applejack reduced to... that?! Wtf? But it's nice, thought I prefer AJ as dominant type and Dash more submissive.
She is all mare- and madly in love- and it said right in the first chapter that she wanted Dash to be her stallion, she's pretty new to the whole fillyfooling thing and is reacting like some ponies see her: not down with the full extent of 'the gaaay, Dashie, the gay!'. But she's resilient and a quick study- and you'll be seeing more of her, a nice blend of the strong manly AJ and the more tender loving one, soon. And remember Dash is on your side here- wants the same AJ you want, and is just as determined as Applejack is.
Fic extended- the next chapter has run so long that I used its beginning as Turnabout's end. That makes it comparable length to the other two.
I will let comments be. Try to be pony about it- I don't like to see the folks who are enjoyin' this, scorned. With a bit of luck, future chapters will cover enough different ground that more ponies are happy- though because of the macguffin, ALMOST all of it will involve the magic bit, and hence magical futa. That's kind of the concept of the story, so if natural-grown strap-ons ain't your thing, this won't end well for you, let's just say...
Wow leaving "bringing joy to all of ponyville" aside, that's the most touching "lets have a sexually open relationship" conversation i've ever read. yay for clingy AJ
Eeyup. I was right. This is so much focus on the sex that characterization gets lost in the process. Sorry, Jinxie. Not enjoying myself. Dash and Applejack are in there somewhere, but they don't shine like they should, and I can't read another word of this. Our 5 hour conversation in the car was far more captivating.
Well, it appears that I'm going to have to set aside the relationship aspect of this story and just focus on the glorious amount of clop. Damnit, I was looking forward to these three stories so much too. I'm going to keep on reading, and maybe I'll like it more as everything progresses, but the open sexual relationship thing kind of deters my heart from this story.
It seems interesting none the less the dialogue seems weird to me, and like someone else said the focus is more on sex than the characters relationship. While I get that it's an open relationship it still doesn't feel like Dash loves Apple Jack the most it just feels like she's a nice fuck on the side. I had high hopes for this story ahh well
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Uh... am I supposed to be deletin' paraspritey comments here? I don't mean to be uncharitable about it, but that ain't really what this page is about, and it hurts the feelin's of the ones who are enjoyin' themselves to sass on them that bad. I don't go around lookin' up fics that I don't like and givin' em lip. What do?
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I think let them be. I kinda feel like it too - wtf i'm reading? Why my strong and proud Applejack reduced to... that?! Wtf? But it's nice, thought I prefer AJ as dominant type and Dash more submissive.
She is all mare- and madly in love- and it said right in the first chapter that she wanted Dash to be her stallion, she's pretty new to the whole fillyfooling thing and is reacting like some ponies see her: not down with the full extent of 'the gaaay, Dashie, the gay!'. But she's resilient and a quick study- and you'll be seeing more of her, a nice blend of the strong manly AJ and the more tender loving one, soon. And remember Dash is on your side here- wants the same AJ you want, and is just as determined as Applejack is.
Fic extended- the next chapter has run so long that I used its beginning as Turnabout's end. That makes it comparable length to the other two.
I will let comments be. Try to be pony about it- I don't like to see the folks who are enjoyin' this, scorned. With a bit of luck, future chapters will cover enough different ground that more ponies are happy- though because of the macguffin, ALMOST all of it will involve the magic bit, and hence magical futa. That's kind of the concept of the story, so if natural-grown strap-ons ain't your thing, this won't end well for you, let's just say...
still reading...
still good...
by the time I got this done maybe you'll have the next chapter or two of Rarity's worst day ever complete.
Poor Applejack. A monogamist falling for a polyamorist.
After acclimating to your peculiar writing style, I find this fic quite enjoyable, I would like to see where it goes from here.
Still enjoying this!
s and s!
Wow
leaving "bringing joy to all of ponyville" aside, that's the most touching "lets have a sexually open relationship" conversation i've ever read.
yay for clingy AJ
Eeyup. I was right. This is so much focus on the sex that characterization gets lost in the process. Sorry, Jinxie. Not enjoying myself. Dash and Applejack are in there somewhere, but they don't shine like they should, and I can't read another word of this. Our 5 hour conversation in the car was far more captivating.
Well, it appears that I'm going to have to set aside the relationship aspect of this story and just focus on the glorious amount of clop. Damnit, I was looking forward to these three stories so much too. I'm going to keep on reading, and maybe I'll like it more as everything progresses, but the open sexual relationship thing kind of deters my heart from this story.
It seems interesting none the less the dialogue seems weird to me, and like someone else said the focus is more on sex than the characters relationship. While I get that it's an open relationship it still doesn't feel like Dash loves Apple Jack the most it just feels like she's a nice fuck on the side. I had high hopes for this story ahh well