Holy fuck I would laugh my ass off if gummy ever got a hold of the bit. I'm also reeeeeealy curious as to who did get it and where AJ was. More good sir if you would he willing to indulge.
110043 Well, some people can turn shopping trips into character development. And that's what I call 'Shopping at the carpet store' if you know what I mean.
Hmm. It seems like with every chapter, Dash does something to make me go "FIFTY DKP MINUS!!!" and then in the next scene or chapter she'll make up for it, but then she'll fuck something up again. I hope we see more of the 'girly' Rainbow Dash.
"Fuck the dream", huh Dashie? I think your dream just fucked you!
(I'm sorry, but I just could not resist!)
Also, this is a great story! Character development is impressive, and there is much more to the story than just clop! Character development, clop, romance, and even sides to the characters that I would have never expected, and have never seen, are explored and masterfully executed in my honest opinion!
Cunnilingus as character development. Never in my life could I have imagined that.
I am... filled with surprise. Rather brilliant.
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spike:the wonders of a mustache ride
twilight:spike rainbow dash doesn't have a mustache
KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is great, thank you, very, very good
That was very sweet!
Though I certainly hope Dash hasn't given up entirely on 'competitive', lust-dripping sexytimes...
Holy fuck I would laugh my ass off if gummy ever got a hold of the bit. I'm also reeeeeealy curious as to who did get it and where AJ was. More good sir if you would he willing to indulge.
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We still haven't seen what happens if a male gets the bit!
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You do understand that the very next time I see you post on a certain board I'm gonna make sure to tease you about commenting on this fic.
Not that I have a lot of room to criticize, seeing as I regularly and openly name this as my favorite of all, but.
This whole series is my favorite.
110043 Well, some people can turn shopping trips into character development. And that's what I call 'Shopping at the carpet store' if you know what I mean.
Holy crap. This is good.
Hmm. It seems like with every chapter, Dash does something to make me go "FIFTY DKP MINUS!!!" and then in the next scene or chapter she'll make up for it, but then she'll fuck something up again. I hope we see more of the 'girly' Rainbow Dash.
Are you sure you have the correct definition of "jaded" in mind?
"Jaded: Tired, bored, or lacking enthusiasm, typically after having had too much of something."
This is getting deeper and more intimate with each chapter.
Will the madness with that bit ever end?
Oh, god. I remember that scene.
Wow, a bit of a cliffhanger there. Oral to build a character...that is unique as hell. Dash's dream while Aj was bucking her...
"Fuck the dream", huh Dashie?
I think your dream just fucked you!
(I'm sorry, but I just could not resist!)
Also, this is a great story! Character development is impressive, and there is much more to the story than just clop!
Character development, clop, romance, and even sides to the characters that I would have never expected, and have never seen, are explored and masterfully executed in my honest opinion!
this song came to mind while reading this chapter
This chapter had my boner confused. I'm totally lost and don't totally understand what happened in this chapter.