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Most of the details have been long lost to time. Almost nothing is known of the Changelings now and most don't honestly care. It's only the select few ponies who have taken the time to learn the history, dig for the relics, and piece together the past who know that there are truths, frightening truths, yet to be found.

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Interesting concept. It needs a bit of technical work, but I'd kind of like to see a more detailed revelation of the Changeling uprising, once you have the time. I understand you have quite a few other projects taking up all your other burners, front, back, and side, at the moment. In addition, there's a group you may be interested in: The Equestrian Historical Society.

The concept is good, but it seems more than a little rushed. The slavery is mainly condensed into a short, "telly" history when it could span numerous parts. If you're going to explore it in more detail later, though, I'm good with that, so I will still give you a fave for the idea. :twilightsmile:

Feel free to run with this idea yourself if you wish.

You just had to say that didn't you?

So I read this out loud with my gears of war soundtrack playing... as soon as I can I'm borrowing my buddy's mic and making a dramatic reading of this. :pinkiehappy:

This is indeed an interesting concept.
Good work!

4892013
I agree with you.



I found an formatting error:

<i>it was all worth it</i>!

If you want to make something italic in fimfiction, do it like this:

[i]it was all worth it[/i]!

Fucking loved this: The concept drew me in almost as much as your cover art and, quite honestly, fimfiction would be sorely lacking if you or someone of great skill didn't continue this! If you or someone else write, or draw, more on this, then please give us another chapter with links. Please! :pinkiehappy:

P.S. Groups! You're very talented, so join some groups and start spreading your stories and art! Go forth and bring glory and happiness to your fellow Bronies!

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