• Member Since 1st May, 2014
  • offline last seen Mar 4th, 2018

Utopianking


I have the same profile name on Fanfiction. I'm going to start posting my pony stories here as well. Enjoy my works.

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Void devours all. When Equestria is created, it wants to devour that universe. But it comes up against a very large roadblock, the natural barrier around the universe. Void has infinite patience, so it WILL devour Equestria, and all its inhabitants. It just needs some help first.

I will be adding the character tags as needed. There will be four chapters.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 19 )

I love how your chaticter is constantly referring to lord oblivion I see great amounts of potential in Void!

So Void is possessing king SOMBRA! Oh I see so much trouble for planet equis!

4831135 Well, technically its reffering the emptiness around worlds, calling that Oblivion. But think how you wish

4836829 Go to his stuff. I put this in a contest in his group.

4836829 Oblivion is basically the overlord of fear and darkness he created evil and he is basically the only force to match up to god

Very nice! I'm loving this! Void is am master of mind tricks mmmm we could use that talent in the abyss!

I say you're pretty close to making the king of the abyss rank!

I want to see how this turns out and what void will do exactly.... I cant wait :pinkiehappy:

:applejackunsure: Why are these chapter are so short?

4905552 The final chapter will be longer.

4905562 Hmm. Ok. I like the story so far but it wasn't good to my taste. Sorry.

4905578 I won't tell you what you do or don't like.

:applejackunsure: I. Didn't like it. But it was a get story and Chapter 4 is long.

Ah very good a world and reality eater I am proud of you Utopianking! This has earned you the rank one of the four abyssalite kings. Congratulations my friend you are now given the tidal Utopianking or Void the first Abyssalite king!

I see an uprising writer... great story! I myself used the term " Void " in my stories, but don't worry: in mine it's not really a living thing, just a gap between the worlds.

Check out the story, if you want.

What does the writing in the icon for your avatar say?

5367059 My avatar?
Ehrmagerd ah schtick
Om my God, a stick.

I disliked this because there were large amounts of exposition in the beginning, and I disliked how Oblivion's thought processes were so similar to a standard person.

6390430 In truth, I know that it isn't all that good. If I could do it all over I would make it almost completely differently. I've only kept it as a reminder of how bad I can make something when I don't really try.

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