Camping can be Evil

by WolfoftheWaves Pony

Day 2 part 3

"WAKE UP SLEEPING BEAUTY!"

"AH!' Luna screamed, having a real light this time being flashed in her eyes. Her eyes flew open, revealing a Draconequus holding a flashlight. "Discord! What are you-" Luna's eyes flickered to something before her and watched in fascination as her hooves slowly turned from blue to black. "Discord, what in the name of-"

"There will be time for that later," Discord said, waving his lion paw about. "Right now, you have to help us."

Luna sat a bit taller up in her sleeping bag. "Help you with what?"

"We found Sombra. But he's..."

"He's what?" Luna asked.

"He's kinda delusional. Probably heat stroke. Oh, and we hope that his lover can snap him out of it long enough to get him into something cool," Discord snickered.

Luna crossed her hooves over her chest. "Why don't you do it yourself?"

"Because he won't cooperate."

"No. I won't go. Not until you tell me what's happening to me."

"What?" Discord said, his face falling. "But where is the fun in-"

Luna cut him off, leaping forward and covering his mouth with her hoof. "Discord, if you say "where is the fun in that" one more time, so help me I will throw one of Chrysalis' porcupines at your face!"

The Draconequus reared back. "Fine, fine. You went god-mode, somehow the spell that kept you as the nightmare got severed but not completely, and now you juts randomly switch back and forth."

"What?'

"Enough stalling!" Discord said, grabbing Luna's hoof. "Time to see your boyfriend!"

Discord dragged the struggling Luna out into the campsite. Luna gasped. Close by, hanging from a tree branch, was the blue unicorn Trixie, bound and gagged. usually, this would make Luna want to kill Discord. But this time around, she found pleasure in it. "Like my little prank?' Discord asked.

"Uh... yeah. I actually kind of do. Seeing as CELESTIA sent her here!"

The gag around Trixies mouth loosened and fell to the ground. "Why you little piece of- I mean, princess. Why must you like what is happening to Trixie?"

"She made me mad. So I tied her up. End of story." Discord said. "Now, let's go see your boyfriend."

Suddenly there was a flash of light, and Luna and Discord were standing on the banks of the lake.

"Wait, he's... here?" She asked him.

"Yep," Discord said, and then started to walking along the bank. Luna followed. "And he is completely delirious."

"Yeah. you told me."

"And I mean it. And you have to fix him."

"Why me? All of this is feeling a bit.. rushed. I just woke up not even TWO minutes ago."

"Yeah, but Sombra's craziness is not only it," He said as he stopped next to a bush with large leaves.

"What's not only it?" Luna asked him.

"Celestia must have a sick sense of humor. Didn't Sombra blow up the last time he was defeated?"

"Uh, yeah."

"Well, then..." Discord reached out and pulled down the large leaf.

Author's Note:

Yes yes, this chapter got out REALLY late. Well, I just started High school. Yay. Ninth grade. Whoo hoo. I will try to get chapters out faster!

Comments

[Lag Incarnate]

Wuh oh, shocking development.

[TheShadowOfZama]

The lenght of this chapter was .... disappointing and why didn't you just go ahead and put what happened to Sombra and how they fix it in the same part? This part doesn't really have a purpose like at all, so yeah I hope that your next chapter possesses something that people can actually review.

[WolfoftheWaves Pony]

4928573 I was kind of rushed. And I threw in a cliff hanger. I am truly sorry it was disappointing. I am disappointed too. But like I said, I just started ninth grade in high school and was a little busy. And also, yes, the next chapter will be better.

[Lazy_]

All bow before me, for I am the 69th viewer of this chapter!

[ParadigmShift]

4928753 You have failed.

[CrimsonNight1]

4928753 I've been in high school for three years, you don't get to have free time, get used to it and ignore the readers that say you need to put longer and more involved chapters out faster.

[Aurora Dimmet]

4930954

No, they are correct. Just because you feel for someone doesn't mean they haven't done what they could or should. Try not to make three years in high school sound like you're speaking from experience. You'll find more of us than you think who have long since left our educational days behind and deal with the real world. Days of high school are practically a comfortable dream now, with more free time than anything most of us get these days. You'll find this out yourself, later on. It only gets harder and more tedious from there on out.

___

So with that said, we know you can do better author. It's not that people are demanding huge and important chapters every few days, but it is not unreasonable that after waiting this long we expect something more than this. My arguments and explanations on various and random issues on this site are longer (at least four times so) and more in-depth, and take me at most twenty minutes. We have faith in you, you can do better with the next chapter for sure. Everybody stumbles, and no one blames you for that.

[pahnazd]

Well, abrupt ending is abrupt. Cliffhangeeeeeeeer!
This ought to be interesting.

And 9th grade aye? How does it feel to have old farts like myself (out of school already, permanently. whoo!) reading your story and liking it?

Anyway, have fun in school! And everything else obviously

[BananasRCoool]

Awesome cliffhanger. I may be weird because I absolutely love cliffhangers. But boy how I love how this was rushed. I am sooo weird but I like rushed stuff. Plz don't hate on me for saying this. I would say that this is the same length as my chapters in my story Lost Hope. You can find it in the related area.

[Banana Prince]

We have Starlight now...
Just putting that out there...

[StubobNumbers]

I'm gonna track this in hopes it gets continued in the future.