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Awesome
We'll, needs a little work, but good story.
What's going on here?
4755858 With??
4755936 Everything! This chapter has enough information to fit three chapters! But the chapter is really rushed. This chapter should be around 5,000- 7,500 in detail and information. I mean, chapter 1 could be all about his life and tell detail like his work, how the town or city looked like, and more. the idea is good in all, BUT it's rushed so far that I had to reread this THREE TIMES before I could fully understand it. I'm sorry if this hurts you, but it's the truth.
4759981 No its fine I said tell whats wrong thanks... I'll have to start on a new version...
4760662 Okay.