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hmm i like this...........give me more
and you did a lot better on your first chapter then idea
Huh. It's got potential, it does. But I think the biggest problem is that you need an editor. I saw a few misspelled words, misplaced punctuation, etc... and several times you used the wrong word. For example...
You probably should have put little filly...
I like it, I do. you just made some mistakes most people new to writing (myself included) have made. Fix them and you'll be good!
When the title said necropony I thought dead space till I realized it said forest