Celestia takes a vacation away from Equestria for a few days, and Luna begs to be left in charge. Celestia decides to give her sister a chance. Unfortunately, Celestia made a mistake, and Luna does several questionable and ridiculous things, like deciding to make Pinkie Pie a princess, making friends with some parasprites, and traveling back in time to say hi to an old friend. And those aren't even the worst parts.
I decided that there isn't enough silly Luna fanfiction, so I made one because Luna is best princess.
Turning pinkie pie into a alicorn is the worst thing luna can possibly do. all I can say now is that equestria is fucked
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4684831 I know, sorry about that. I noticed the paragraphs had become way too chunky when I proofread it, but I sort of couldn't tell myself where exactly one point ended and another point began. I'm trying to work on having less obese paragraphs in chapter 3. Hopefully that makes it less... painful... to absorb.
Very funny story. Not sure if Luna is actually that incompetent but it does seem like something the show writers would do. I can see her reacting to the noble ponies the way she did. I always get the feeling that crossing Luna would be a bad thing. Added to favs
4685889 Why, thank you, young gentlecolt!
4684518 Equestria is royally fucked.
WEEEEE HAHA
BOOOOOOOOM *runs around wildly for about 2 seconds and sees confetti* oh its pinkie pie
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Duh!!
Welllllllllll......... YES!!!
Art thou going to drink more story????
Shit, man, this story is coming along slower than a shit the diameter of a tree out of an undersized anus.