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Brightlight24
Quite frankly, I'm a simple person who enjoys watching the show from time to time, and an avid reader/writer.
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I absolutely love this concept! And is it bad that I picture the main character as Ray Charles?
It seems this could be a nice story, i like having such people in a fanfic. I have to confess, yes maybe i get a bit helpfull with that people to say so, but i try not to do it to much, because i think they maybe not want to be......i struggle with the words in english right now. I think they don´t need or want to much pity and i respect that, but i like such storys, i just hope you finish this. I only said that because i new another story with a blind pony but there is hardly something new.
I hope you make it long enough or allowed a sequel, i can say i probably want one if this one is finish, i just like this theme.
Wow, this is really well written. I like where it's going...keep up the good work!
I will nitpick against one little thing...it should be 'Braille'. Damn Frenchmen and their strange spelling.
I'm looking forward to seeing this continued!
Interesting. You have a good concept here. You have my attention.
Im impressed good work btw how has that Story I have sent going?
this is really nice, i see it soon as a favourite of mine i suppose. And i can image Octavia as the one who is starting to make the probably soon relationship real. I mean i see hear asking him already, is is somehow cute because she seems to be rather anxious about him.
Wow, this is interesting!
I have played with the concept of blindness before, though it was an opposite case of scenario, with a pony mare being the blind one, getting to Earth...
But anyways. This story seems to have a high factor of quality, paired with quantity, which I adore.
I will read the next chapters now and write a comment once I am done.
-Zeph
Well, this was quite the read, and it is not even over! I am looking forward for the next chapter, I enjoyed the existing ones thoroughly.
I liked Octavia ever since the beginning, I can see why you choosed her, I imagine her to be almost exactly like this.
Hm. I have to confess, as I realize it now she is my favorite background pony, if not favorite of all.
Well, I hope the story will continue soon, I am more than eager to read more of thus beautifully crafted piece of... art.
Bravo, sir!
-Zeph
This fic holds great promise, keep it up!
First chapter is quite good, I hope you continue this for a little longer than you were going to.
This is an interesting story. A favorite, you have earned
I'm enjoying it immensely. I really hope you keep it slow, and let the story take as long as it needs to. The second chapter was a little rushed to me. Overall, really liking it.
Don't move too fast please. That the sure fire easiest way to ruin a good story, messing up the pacing. Otherwise a good chapter. I think we need more of these types of chapters, adjusting to the pony world should be a while coming.
I really like this, as much as i want Octavia to make a move like cuddle with him or something like that, or that he asked her if he could touch her face to have something like a picture, i think it is good the way it is. The longer we have to wait for a real nice moment between them, i think the better it is.
PS: The think with the painting, that he get a new part of an image for every chapter is somehow nice. I mean every chapter a part of Octavia went into his mind and i think the moment he had the whole image is probably the moment they kiss or make out the first time or just cuddle a bit.
I think i would prefer it if the first time they make out with each other is not a whole adventure, i mean i see Octavia more as a delicate mare which would try to save the moment and not really the fast and wild style you maybe would exxpect from Rainbow Dash.
I don´t really want to talk only about this, but i wanted to make sure you know nearly what i whould like to see. I don´t say you have to do, but maybe it is something you are just fine with. I see it right now as one of my top favourites.
PSPS: In the resturante, had they just a ackward moment because he was blind and the waiter doesn´t knew if he should give him a menu or not?
Hmmm, interesting!
A shared meal with shared stories... good start to build a relationship, to be honest.
However, there is something I noticed (and might be only me passing through details, but), Octavia knew Shimmer Sky from before? Huh.
Nevertheless, this was a good chapter, not too long, neither short, contained one major scene... but a new one should be on the line sooner than this was compared the earlier chapters. Anyway. Keep up with the good work, let us see the magic happen!
-Zeph
Always a pleasure Reading a new chapter of this fic.
A wild Rainbow Bash appears. It's super effective?
A smudge on his mental painting.......what will be next?
4785966 i didn´t knew what really happend, beside the fact that he is apparently falling, but yeah Maybe it is Rainbow Dash
I would like it if he has more contact with more ponys or maybe if he could visit Vinyl and OCtavia at their hous if the thing get more serious.
I would be happy if he speak with a few more ponys. That is one of the best fanfics i had read yet, not one chapter is boring and it make me always happy to read it, but of course there are still things i would like to happen, like himm talking to other ponys too.
I don´t know if i said it already, but i would like if it woud be a long story, or if you maybe could make a sequel. The way you write this story makes me wish there would be a sequel with them starting a family and maybe adopting a foal (to skipp the grow progress for the story), .........
Let me just say i would like a sequel already, i always ask for an adoption story, but i really like that Pairing and at most i like Octavia in here.
4788089 It is implied that he has acquainted himself with a majority of the town.
4789151 that i have understand, i mean more
....... i think it s maybe a difficult wish but i thought more about the thing, that i want him speak with more then the two mares at the moment.
But i don´t want him to change to much in this fanfiction, because i love nearly everything about it, i just wanted a bit more conversation at that moment. It is not that i want him to change anything about the fanfic, i think today i was just in the mood for more conversation between Eugene and maybe at least Vinyl. It was just a mood..
PS: Your Avatar
......everytime
4786092 because of his mental Canvas, the fanfic is somehow a bit artistical and i like that too.
Interesting... I wonder, what's the reason behind Octavia's missing and this ending...
Something hit Eugene, right, but where did our favorite mare go?
Hm. I hope the next chapter will tell.
-Zeph
Oh dear.
Still I enjoy this work, we rarely have HiE who are blind, makes things a bit more int resting.
Beautiful. Just heart wrechingly beautiful.
Yes! It's great to see you are still working on this fic.
Thank you for the new chapter, it is awesome to read it again. While i read this chapter i remember everything what happend, Rainbow Chrased inside of him, while he was thinking about Octavia and such things right? That was that epic Cliffhanger wasn´t it!?!
Octavia is very caring, you have to make this story very long, i really enjoy the story and every chapter really much.
Wonderful, simply wonderful.
Beautiful. Almost made me cry.
When we lose our loved ones we only realize how much they mean to us.
I think this was a series of events that made Octavia bond with Eugene, a close bond, yes. The way the story unfolds, it is still quite nice. Continue please, create more of this piece of art, don't let painting on the canvas be left... unfinished.
-Zeph
I have not the best idea of what coud he want to say right now, it is just to long since i had read the story.
Well i don´t blame you, it is nice to have the story back and maybe i read it again to know it to 100%.
Anyway, it was a nice chapter, i just wish i woud remember what exactly was the reason OCTAVIA was sad in the hospital and not him, i just don´t remember what her own reason was.
WORTH THE WAIT! Hopefully this gets updated regularly now.
Looking foward to the next chapter!
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Well is there going to be a new chapter? I noticed how many storys I have, that are already one year without a new chapter.
new chapter please
Are you still working on these stories?
the story is dead right?