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Brightlight24
Quite frankly, I'm a simple person who enjoys watching the show from time to time, and an avid reader/writer.
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wow a new story I'll be sure to read it sometime today
Interesting, I hope to see more soon.
Please oh please oh please make an update!
I like the cover as is actually, you've added the ponies to the background very well, the shadows are nice touches.
Very nice, looking forward to see this fic develop as it continues.
You're descriptive writing and inner monologue both stand out to me as exceptionally good! Keep up the great work.
It was a nice look into Cheerilee's life, but how will the human tien into it? In the first chapter, it was explained how he was tied to Mayor Mare.
It was nice I imagine so far those chapter are for introduce characters I imagine
Favorited this, set it to watch and then found out it was canclled......WHYYYYYY
FANFICTION AUTHOR WHYYYYY!!! 
Please continue this story......if possible. Everything is set up for an epic story. and like you stated before.... these lovely mares realy don't get the attention they deserve. 
seriously though everything comes together beautifully. all the characters have a valid reason for coming together, got a little backhistory for them and the hint for possible romance (in my opinion) is their.
Hope we get to read more of this.
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Nice can't wait for the next one
Glad that the human has finally arrived, hopefully the pace of the story will pick up a bit now that all 3 of the main characters are in Ponyville.
Good stuff so far. Glad Will is in ponyville now. Can't wait for more!
you can't cancel this. it's starting to get good.
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Cancel? I've just been focusing on some of my other stories for a bit. Don't worry though, this one is next. :D
I can't wait for more chapters! Cheerilee and Mayor Mare don't get enough love!!
Yay! This story finally got an update! Please to be doing more in the near future please!
Happy to see an update. Looks like Ivory Scroll wants that extra help sooner than later.
I've said it once and I'll say it again. The story is progressing at a snail's pace. I like what is going on but we aren't having any speedy movement in the plot. I certainly don't want the Author to speed up and do everything too quick, but it's the 7th chapter and the mayor and her assistant still haven't met. Essentially all that happened this chapter was Cheerilee was invited to a party and she went.
And I also haven't seen any real character development other than Mayor Mare and Cheerilee dislike how tiring their jobs are. Pinkie Pie is one dimensional as hell( to be fair she's pretty bad in all fanfics) and the human has such an unimpressive personality that I don't even remember his name(ah yes it's Will or something akin to that) I don't mean to come off as a hater. But I like the idea of this story and want to see it reach it's fruition. And yet so far all I've seen is clunky exposition and lacking dialogue.
That being said I look forward to the next chapter, if only that I hope something important happens
This is a really good story I would love to see more of this! If you're still working on it.
