After Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwhich plans Rainbow Dash's party. Cheese Sandwhich decides to asks Pinkie Pie to go on the date. What will she say? Will her friends approve of her decision?
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Hmm, very interesting. I look forward to seeing more.
Interesting... do go on.
Luv
Hasbro was waiting for them to be shipped. And I am interest.
Edit:
Dew done fix plox.
Wow! 15 likes already!? I'm a bit Jelous, Solar Tumble! Okay, maybe a lot jelous....
I like it quite a lot!
A few things:
The pacing could go a little slower, try expanding on what the characters are thinking/feeling. It would have been cool to see some stuff that was mentioned, like the dream.
Also, you might want to look over the spelling and such like, I noticed a few errors.
But I'm no genius!
COOOOOONNNNNNTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEE
(My anti fangirling chill pill is starting to wear off
)
Im soo happy this is back
Misspelled Pumpkin and Belle.
Thanks fatboi1000. I'll fix that.
the pacing is a little fast but i like the story
What?