Chapter 1
It was a normal sunny day in Ponyville. It was mid-afternoon and Pinkie Pie and her friends were still cleaning up from Rainbow Dash's Birthday Bash. But Dash noticed that Pinkie Pie seemed a bit off, little did Rainbow Dash know that Pinkie was thinking of a certain stallion.
"Pinkie, is there something on your mind?" asked Dash.
"What? Oh, u-um no, no there's nothing at all," Pinkie nervously said.
I can't tell Rainbow Dash. She'll tell everypony. She's such a blabber-mouth. I can't trust her unless she... no, no I just can't tell her. But maybe, just maybe I can trust Applejack if I make her Pinkie Promise... no I can't trust her either. I just can't trust any pony. But maybe I can trust Twilight. I won't tell her, but I'll ask her for advice. I'll have to choose my words carefully so I won't give it away. Ya, ya that's what I'll do.
Pinkie Pie woke up from the best dream. It was even better than a dream then when she had a dream about eating a giant cake. It was about Cheese Sandwhich. She hopped out of bed with a grin from ear to ear. She got ready to go to Twilight's house, to see what she should do about Cheese Sandwhich.
Before she left, she picked up her favorite breakfast. Cupcakes. After she finished her five cupcakes she started to head out into town. She did her morning routine which was of coarse to say 'Hi' to everypony.
When she got to Twilight's house she realized she had no idea what to say. Why am I doing this right now if I have no idea of what to ask?
Pinkie was to caught up in her thoughts that she didn't even realize that she knocked. Maybe I should just leave and do this another day, or never-
But her thoughts were interrupted by Twilight Sparkle.
"Oh," Twilight said surprised to see Pinkie Pie. "Hi Pinkie. What are you doing up so early?"
But Pinkie Pie was still in deep though when Twilight said her name. "Pinkie Pie?" she asked. "Pinkie Pie," Twilight said. "Pinkie Pie!" as she yell Pinkie Pie finally payed attention.
"Twilight, You don't have to yell like that," Pinkie responded.
"Yes I did. I had to say your name three times, in order to get your attention!" Twilight said really annoyed.
"Oh," Pinkie said really shocked. "I'm sorry."
"That's fine." Twilight said in response. "Why don't you come in?"
"Thanks," Pinkie said. What am I going to say to her? Come on brain, think of something!
"So, why did you stop by?" Twilight said thoughtfully. "Not that I don't want to see you or anything," Twilight add to make sure that she didn't hurt her friend's feelings.
"I have a question," Pinkie said.
"Oh." Twilight was really surprised that Pinkie had a question. "Well I'm pretty sure that I can ans-" but Twilight was inturupted by Pinkie Pie.
"Well, I need more advice then information." Pinkie replied nervously. What if Twilight finds out after I ask her my question? What if, what if-
"Well I should be able to help." Twilight replied. Most ponies came to her for information or books, not advice. If Pinkie Pie thinks I can answer it then I should be able to. It's not like she'll ask me if she should jump off a bridge. That would be ridiculous. Well we are talking about Pinkie now, so you never know with her and her crazy machines/contraptions.
"Ok Pinkie, ask me all the questions in the world." Twilight said.
"All the questions in the world? Really? That would take some thinking. But I'll just ask you-" But she was interrupted by Twilight.
"Well Pinkie Pie, not any question in the world, but you can ask me the question you have."
"Ok, here it goes." Remember Pinkie. You need to pick your words carefully so she won't suspect anything and start to ask questions. "Well, um, what, um. What do you, um. What do you do when, um. When you um-"
"Pinkie, I don't meant to rush you, but can you ask the question already!?" Twilight said raising her voice.
"What do you do when you have a friend, that likes somepony, but your friend is worried that if she tells her friends, or some ponyelse, that their friends/that somepony they told, that they would just tell everypony or laugh at them?" Pinkie asked quickly. Good Job Bee Brain. That was a good way to put that question.
"Wow Pinkie. I did not think that a question like that would come from you," Twilight said clearly taken back. "I actually don't have an answer to that, I'm sorry to say. That kind of question would probably be for Rarity, of all ponies." Twilight was unsure why Pinkie was asking this question. Maybe she really does have a friend that is going through that. But what if Pinkie is actually going through that? Pinkie Pie knows she can trust her closet friends, right? Twilight was to caught up in her own thoughts, that she didn't notice that Pinkie Pie's mane deflated a bit.
"Oh. I understand," Pinkie said sadly. "Thank you for your time, Twilight." Pinkie Pie slowly walked toward that door before she heard Twilight's voice.
"You know you can trust me, right?" Twilight finally said, but she was to late. Pinkie had already walked out the door.
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Hmm, very interesting. I look forward to seeing more.
Interesting... do go on.
Luv
Hasbro was waiting for them to be shipped. And I am interest.
Edit:
Dew done fix plox.
Wow! 15 likes already!? I'm a bit Jelous, Solar Tumble! Okay, maybe a lot jelous....
I like it quite a lot!
A few things:
The pacing could go a little slower, try expanding on what the characters are thinking/feeling. It would have been cool to see some stuff that was mentioned, like the dream.
Also, you might want to look over the spelling and such like, I noticed a few errors.
But I'm no genius!
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(My anti fangirling chill pill is starting to wear off
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