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Well, there needs to be a bit more background to fill in the holes, but aside from that it's okay.
Gr8 fic m8 would r8 8/8 l8er after some t8er tots. Don't tempt f8 or sk8 l8 or it's a d8
4651663 Well, the story originally was 2 unnamed ponies because I didn't want to put too much effort into characters (Cause this is all just practice for characters interacting with characters, not the characters themselves), but the story got denied because it wasn't related to mlp well enough, so I threw 2 characters in.
This actually wasn't too bad. You could use some work on the minor details, because I saw several small mistakes. Other than that, though, it was enjoyable read. I give it a 9/10.
4651823 Tell me all the mistakes, I must fix. I will never forgive myself if I don't
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Don't worry, I'll reread it and tell you all the mistakes soon.
Not a bad fic. It was an interesting pair to say the least. It surprised me
This was good. Simple, but effective.
A like and a favorite from the religious man.
Ba-b......oh wait you did that already, darn
This was a great read. It had everything I love: Thunderlane; Roseluck; dark alley, pent-up sex; excess cum; seduction; submission/domination; and a hint about the future. Love it.
Ah, just like any other night here in Jersey. You should really think about making another chapter
One thing; he had condoms. And he came inside her. Without outting one on.