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Wait, Chrysalis is an understanding mother into incest?
And something tells me, Fred's endowment is thanks to Shining or something of that line if this were used to the canon.

Fred's endowment is thanks to Shining or something of that line if this were used to the canon.

What do you mean by that?

Let the lagest orgy of pony kind begin!

As said by many before me: LET THE MADNESS BEGIN.:pinkiecrazy:

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Maybe when Chrysallis was impersonating Cadance, they did it, and Fred is Shining's kid. Or something like that.

Requires a fair bit of proofreading--there are several spelling and grammar mistakes scattered about, as well as not capitalizing proper names and titles.

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If you've read my earlier stories, I have the same excuse.

Small hands, small device, autocorrect.

This was entirely typed in a hand held device, as well a written at about two in the morning.

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Ah, I apologize, I was not aware of these circumstances.

aside all the clopyness this is very funny :pinkiehappy: . and I get a sense that it's a little bit based on that anime Karen :derpytongue2:

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It's okay...I'll hunt down and kill...I mean...find a proofreader to fit my schedule some day....

DA FUCK IS PART 2!!!!!!!!!!!

A semen... shotgun?

...

Okay.

Great going on the story so far, but I must ask...

How do you get such nice spaces between the horizontal rules and the text? I can never get more than two, and it bugs me to no end D:

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On a computer it's much simpler, but on a touchscreen that I'm using, it's a long process.

First, remember to hit the space bar exactly seven times before every paragraph. Then hit return once or twice between them depending on subject matter.

For the large spaces, spam the return key a few times, hit the line devider icon (hr) then return some more.

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Freaky :/
Whenever I write in the Fimfiction client, no matter how many returns I put before the hr, it will automatically cut to one :(

Unless you don't use the client, in which I'll probably say 'oh' and open up MS word and copy some returns X_x

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: first on the fuck train is the sexy Zebra

3A

If you don't mind me asking, what gender is the author?

I like it. Please keep on writing. Also, I would love to see more sex scenes involving Chrysalis.

Good news everybody!

An elaborate scheme that I have plotted for three years is now coming to fruition! Now I'll be able to update stories much faster!

But only if I have free time.

Next chapter will come this week, and its a duzzie!

3A

3101275 Well, your pic is a mare, and ... I sound stupid don't I.:facehoof:

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Don't worry..we all feel a little feminine on the inside.

Some more then others...

Comment posted by 3A deleted Aug 27th, 2013

Sorry for the delay.....
New chapter at least this week! If your bored, check out my HOTD crossover story!
Check my user page and my top stories!

Not going to read, it no offense it just doesn't tickle my fancies, but I'm just wondering, the anime you based if if is Chibi Vampire correct?

Dammit I wanted to read this but I didn't notice the anthro thing... I hate humanised ponies... Oh what the buck, I'll give it a try... Wish me luck...

Changeling incest... Nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope...

I can't dislike the story just because of that reason though so ill leave it blank...

Just to let you guys know that I'm not dead....next chapter is coming this Labor Day weekend.

New chapter. Every one do the Harlem Shake!

Sorry about typos, I'll fix then tomorrow, just point them out for me, and I'll change them when I get back from work.

Yes...I work on Labor Day.

This is exactly what I look for in clopfics! Everything was described so perfectly; from the implied rape scene, to the afterglow with Zecora. The descriptions painted full pictures for me.

Bravo good sir, bravo indeed!:moustache:

O.o so, who's the dad of that changeling? one who gives out love, or at the least an aphrodisiac of sorts?

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Well it's not Shinning. I can give you that!

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Would have been hilarious if he was, then Chrysalis has enough reason to return to him and use blackmail.

Holy shit that was epic and can some get me some new pants?

Another good chapter. I really feel bad for Chrysalis' first time but kinda wished you had included her rape scene in the story.

3143618 Wouldn't it be that asshole Prince? What was it, Garthon? I mean he at one point became her husband, Though it does seem she is no longer with him.:trixieshiftleft: :unsuresweetie: :duck:

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If it was her arranged marriage, she would not need to know about ponies if her son can produce love, but that is not possible, unless an unknown mutation occurred which can be if she had a child with a pony.

3158363 Changelings are incapable of feeding off of other changelings.

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So, if a changeling can produce love and give off then that means he may not be a pure changeling.

Comment posted by RedoutPony deleted Sep 28th, 2020
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