Twilight and her friends grew very close in a matter of days, and after overcoming challenges like Discord and the changelings, they're tighter than bark on a tree. However, along the road, Twilight became an alicorn, and therefor, immortal. It is roughly 80 years after their battle with Tirek and all of her friends have passed. The young alicorn, well relatively young, now struggles to cope with the loss of her friends. Can anyone help her through this depression?
Inspired by Black Gryph0n and Baasik's "Faster Than You Know"
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Figured it was about time I checked this out. Pretty good, overall, I felt. Twi was pretty presumptuous, thinking that Celestia had never experience loss like her. But, she always did basically worship Celestia as more than a pony, so she may not really view her as such. During that last little stretch, there was one thought that lingered in my mind. As far as I know, it's true.
Everyone who has ever survived says they changed their mind on the way down. Everyone.
This was actually really good!
Other then a few missing or incorrect words, it was written very well!
And for me, it's the writing quality and not the spelling and grammar that makes a story good (unless the spelling/grammar is reeeeally bad).
I liked it! ^_^
P.S. I had to stop reading for a short bit when she was remembering her friend's last words because I was gonna cry, you really did good capturing the emotions.
5715130 Well this was my first story, and I've improved much since. I feel like this should be a conclusion chapter, rather than a one-shot. I keep it the way it is, though, because it sort of where I began. When I'm writing my highest quality stuff I can look back at this and be like "Whoa. That was me at one point."
And as twisted as it sounds out of context, I am happy to see you cry.
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I guess that does sound kinda twisted XD
but I totally get it; I prefer emotion driven stories over other kinds, sow hen writing them you gotta TRY to make the reader get the feels.
I'll check out some of your newer stuff, then~