Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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Nice. This chapter got a lot of laughs out of me. Few things strike me as funny as Twilight threatening to end someone.
8479005 I sincerely hope the clueless Shining Armor part also got some laughs.
There was a lot of re-writing going on in this chapter and, due to several people pointing out that I'd poorly formatted previous chapters, I went back over this chapter again and again and again, hoping I'd got all the bugs and edits ironed out.
Also never challenge an Immortal in regard to their 'Sphere of Influence'. Celestia in moving the sun and inspiring hope. Luna with the moon and shepherding dreamers. And apparently Cadence in the spreading and nurturing of love and being the mad queen of shipping.
hahahahha Squeeeeeeeeee ahhaaha
wow shiny armor is so clueless
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Of course the clueless Shining got a few chuckles too. Though I'll admit I think Spike having enough of everyone was what got the loudest laugh out of me honestly. If anyone deserves an "I'm surrounded by idiots" moment more than Twilight it would have to be him.
Is it wrong to feel a little sorry for the spa twins. I hope their business wasn't ruined by them coming on too strong.
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That's probably part of why cadence loves him.
Shining Armor truly howonderful dense can you be! XD atleast Cadance clued in and twi's reaction to Luna’s teasing was adorable!
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true, he so clueless he wont ever look at another mare.....
I absolutely love how clueless Shining Armor is through all this. I couldn't stop laughing.
You are going to break Twilight so bad that Lesson Zero will be considered normal.
I like it.
We-heh-hell, that got a bit rapey.
8480714 Just a skooch, and I will explain in later chapters why this keeps happening to Twilight.
I spent three re-writes agonizing over the Spa-Twins before I decided to just accept there was no 'good' way to write what was going to happen and tried to make it more comedic than creepy, but I still don't believe I achieved that goal.
you've set up so many opportunities that you could split the events into many different stories, between the changelings, the retired soldiers, and Twilight and Luna. I'm so excited for progression on any front from this story. I was grinning the entire time and had to excuse my self for water more than once after coughing to cover up my laughter.
I still laugh every time I see your avatar and username after awhile.
Pft, hahaha. This just keeps getting better and better.
favourite part:
Twilight calling Celestia a bitch (I know Luna did too, but it's just funnier coming from Twilight)
Close second;
This whole interaction is beautifully done...
Oh yes that is some good insanity comming over the web.
Seriously that was a ton of fun!
I...wonder if cadence realized about the crusaders?
Poor Trixie, the horrors she must have endured.
i do not like the egregious clop.
i do not like the futa stuff either.
but the rest of the story is pretty good, despite needing some editing or at least spell checking.
Welp, I just read the whole thing front to end. Very lovely I must say.
Let me say one thing. Clop? I never read clop. I abhor clop. I only meant to read one chapter of this... okay one more... eh? The whole thing is read?! Wow, this is good!
I swear to god, your disclaimer makes me think of Hellsing abridged and I read that in Father Anderson's voice. You protestant fuckbucket.
(no offense intended)
Oh my word, this chapter is great. The comedy is pure gold. I must agree with Twilight though, eeeeee. Watch out folks, the princess of mad shipping is on your tails! Of course, we're all mad here...
This is just a wild guess, but... maybe they learned it in Ponynesia?
I don’t get what’s up with your herm/futa characters having black sheathes. I thought at first that maybe it was just part of the curse, but then it was the same for the Spa Sisters, who are supposed to be “natural” hermaphrodites, so what’s up with that?
YES, YES, YES, AND MORE YES!!!! I dont have the slighted idea why but this made my 2 a.m. !
Crazy Cadance is my new religion