Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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Interesting take on Night Light's back story. I like it.
I think this is just love in denial at this point xD
That's an interesting take on Night Light, I liked that.
Quick question is it Brass or Bronze Leaf, as it was Brass Leaf in two instances and Bronze Leaf elsewhere.
4756245 Thanks for spotting that, fixing it right now to 'Bronze'. Stupid mistake there, gah.
4755606 Parents are always badasses to their children. In the case of Twilight and Shining's father, he's an official badass, just retired these days.
I like what you did with Night light here.
I'm a bit on the fence. This is pretty funny, and occasionally poignant. Overall, it's just fun to read.
But it's also a bit frustrating. It feels like some chapters underwent heavy editing, and weren't quite put back together properly. For instance:
This question has no context, because there was no mention of a marriage contract. I'm guessing a line was cut somewhere. This isn't the only time this has happened, and this is one of the least confusing.
Also, I can't help but scratch my head at the almost-graphic scenes in this story. At a certain point I have to wonder why this is being danced around.
Still confused on what going in between twixe and sunset out side the wings why are they stuck together
Just accept the gay energy
Accept iiiiiiiit