Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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Time for more Zecora writing Faust dang it.
People have asked why there's not more Pinkie Pie in this fanfic.
It's very simple.
She irritates the !@#$ out of me
First season she was okay, second season, eh, third season it was just nonsense and lol-I'm-random meme bulldust thrown into the show simply because 'Oh Pinkie, you're so random'.
It's not endearing. It's aggravating. I literally skip those episodes when I'm babysitting one of my D&D player's little girl because I physically can not be in the room when she pops onto the screen. Very rarely in season 4 have we ever seen the original 'nutbar' Pinkie that we loved so much from season 1.
Tone down the random and go back to the '4th wall' for Pinkie's jokes.
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One of the things I wanted to challenge myself with this story is "How can I write a sex-scene without going full-on clop/porn?" Tasteful Clop, and no, I don't mean licking the hoof afterwards. Not sure if it worked or not, but considering that children can access this site and potentially access my story, even if they do have to click the sex/gore/mature tags, that's a level of squick I hope to avoid.
Also I don't like Chris Hansen.
You did a pretty good job of covering enough of the sex to catch the bits relevant to the ongoing story. And really a pretty clean rendition, too, which is hilarious when the characters involved were having anime-explosion-generating sex.
Oh, and you add in a completely unnecessary synopsis in this chapter again. You don't need to run down that Luna and Twilight just had super-powered sex when it only just happened - your readers have a longer attention span than that, I promise.
IIIIII LLLLLOOOOOOOVVVVEEEE IIIIIIITTTTTTTT!!!!!!
That is my new anthem!!! Thank you!!!!!!
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Who is Chris Hansen?