Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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This is getting good.
I'm noticing I'm making everyone swear a bit much, I'll work on that.
Is Zecora's rhyming coming across alright, or is it sounding forced? She's damn hard to write with that verbal gimmick.
Any other bugs/issues/complaints, let me know.
4602533 I think you're doing just fine with it, Neckbeard, but that is of course just my personal opinion on the subject.
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It sounds a little forced. But then, I can't recall ever seeing someone write Zecora without it coming out at least a little forced. Even exceptionally well-written Zecora tends to sound forced.
Having one character constantly rhyming in prose is always going to be awkward. I don't really think there's any way around it.
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My headcannon? Fluttershy's slim but busty , Zecora's muscular but has an ass that could deflect cannon-fire ,
Mostly just to mess with Big Mac's head.
Apologies for the lack of updates, WoW has grabbed me by the jugular over the past few days, writing the next chapter up right now.
Oh for the love of... I laughed so hard at the last 5-8 lines XD
4620836 That was basically me looking at my past writing attempts, which took months to finish, and I thought "Holy crap, better add a recap."
I never expected to get off to such a burst, right off the bat, and keep on steaming along like this.
This is one very awesome fanfic!
You do not know how hard I laughed at this chapter, good job and yes Pinkie Pie is crazy
Is there going to be a prequel to this? It sounds like something happened before all of this...misadventure.
5068195 In regards to the 'pre-history' of Equestria, what Celestia was doing as the first Pony immortal, how she and Luna met and became 'sisters', how they managed to get the three Tribes that came from the north to unite, all of that will be explained in later chapters. Trying to not make this 'rushed', but at the same time ... we need to move this thing on a touch faster than it's going now ...
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I loled so much when Rainbow woke up screaming Twilight was a lesbian.
Poor zecora. And yes AJ, Rareity is a total bitch
Princess (Queen) Celestia Goddess of Equestria,
Princess Luna goddess of Bat Ponies,
Princess Kaydence goddess of Pegesi,
Princess Twilight goddess of Unicorns,
Princess ??? goddess of Earth Ponies,
Sounds like a full court; no need for annoying nobles? just them five decide/debate on ALL laws/decrees? no room for corruption?
THAT SOUNDS PERFECT!!!
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It’s obviously Princess Big Mac of the earth ponies.
Because as Everypony know, Big Mac is best princess.