Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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I wrote the damn thing, and even I can't help but laugh and yet feel horrible for poor little Filly Twilight.
You may throw the rotten tomatoes. I deserve them for this chapter.
This is where I started laughing out loud:
And I lost my shit for two minutes. Not even exaggerating. I had to stop and calm down before losing my shit a second time at Luna's reply a few paragraphs later.
And that's blackmail material for the younger sibling right there.
Laughed so hard I woke up my cats.
Was there any part of this that felt flat or just boring?
Did I miss any 'steps' in the flashback to when Twilight was a Filly?
Anything that sounded confusing or just wrong to people?
I'm sorry, that whole scene made me laugh so hard, and that sentence was just the icing on the cake.
It wasn't boring.
Due to my distaste for some of the ships in this story I hav been skim reading anything that is not discord and celestia or Twiluna.
But I gotta say, I hit the end of this chapter and just had to reread the flashback to twilight playing with celestias.... Toy... The reaction from celestia, and twilights parents when they found her made me lose it with laugher for a lot longer than I have laughed in a while. Lunas reactions as Twilight told the story was also golden.
Despite being sorely tempted to stop reading due to fluttershy and rainbow dash not being shipped together (I am totally against any ship or strong hinting that competes with the Flutterdash ship...), I think this chapter is enough of a Twiluna LOL to continue. And that is saying a lot coming from someone who used to only write Flutterdash fan fiction.
This story so far has been what I would consider a mix of inappropriate humour and some very strange ideas.
It works. Even though I don't personally like it all.
I feel bad for celestial.
>>Giant_Neckbeard I don't think anyone is going to throw a rotten tomato at you after that. That was the funniest thing I have read in a long time.
Oh yeah, Lulu, get onto her for picking up a dildo with her mouth at a time she didn't know what it was...while you were imagining eating out a certain part of her while enjoying a doughnut.