Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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I'm not entirely happy with this chapter.
It's sweet ^^
Though I am wondering exactly what Tia did...
4575368 That'll crop up again in later chapters.
Let's just say the history that the Ponies and other sentient Races of Equestria are told is a heavily edited and sanitized version in this setting.
Speaking of which, should I label this as 'Alternate Universe' or not, considering the liberties I'm taking with Twilicorn, Cadence and the history of Equestria?
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I'd say you on on the barrier between canon and AU but to be safe i'd go with AU. I really am loving your story so far ^^
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I'd err on the side of caution and add it myself. Though, AU tag or no, this is a great story so far.
Four cliffhangers in one chapter? Good thing you update fast cause that is a little harsh! I like how natural the conversations between characters are flowing since many stories deel like just one char talking through many mouths.
But four man. Wow.
First person thought using third person lines