this is the life of my oc taking care of a daughter with a secret problem
thank you scythe and Midnight Wings for help writing this and oc usage
im Magic my oc is Magic Blood and i love mlp and clop
this is the life of my oc taking care of a daughter with a secret problem
thank you scythe and Midnight Wings for help writing this and oc usage
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Okay...so...I wouldn't say the story is bad, you just need an editor or a proofreader...I can't really think of anything else to say, other than 'good luck'.
4904251 i got 2 proof readers XD and thanks
An OC story? Okay then, normally not to critical on these, depending on how much the author cares for critisum or just wants to write as an outlet ^^’ but you keep doing you regardless