Let's heat this up, because writing always gets me worked up, and in an awesome way!
If you were able to go back to a single point in time to fix a single mistake, would you?
Erik was a writer, but an injury to his hand took that away from him. He loved his father more than anything in the world, and he lay dying in the hospital. He had nothing left, and his singular choice seemed grim. But when he takes that grim choice, it does not end the way it would usually.
A second chance to fix a mistake.
Because when everything falls apart, you still remember, always.
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Well... this certainly is a thing.
1681617
Could you please elaborate on what you mean? I never thought you, of all people, would be the first to comment on one of my stories.
It's an honor.
1681743 What, me of all people?
The story's pretty interesting. You get a like.
1681748
People have a lot of respect for you, so do I. Sorry if it sounded strange. And thanks, Regidar.
This story has a thing in common with another story I've read: Through the Eyes of Another Pony, by CardsLafter. Amazing writer, interesting ideas. The one thing in common is that a human gets sent into Equestria, and becomes a pony. The major difference in how it happens is that Erik, well, tries to commit suicide.
Thanks for the like.
1681774 Nah, I'm flattered. I really have no idea why people respect me so.
And you're welcome.
1681786
They shouldn't; you suck.
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Okay I'm joking.
1682038
This is awesome. Add more chapters!
Preread Comment:
I don't usually look at stories when their added to folders in HiE, but your title has caught my attention. I'll read this sometime tonight and get back to you.
--RoamingHooves, out.--
1704556
Thanks. I can't particularly CLASS this as HiE, but I joined the group to share my story.
Ah, another shamless self-insert with potential to be the most amazing piece of literature there is. Lil' cliche, but lets face it; what hasn't been done yet? You get my thumbs and favs. I'll be tracking this.
--RoamingHooves--
1705020
This is NOT a self-insert. I abhor self-inserts, and I've attempted to move away with this.
Considering what I've tried to do, take a look at what really is going on.
1681743 Erik was such a brilliant writer, a great son, and loved his dad like there was no tomorrow. but after his father died, everything turned to Sh**. His stories weren't selling, his health was horrible, and he became depressed. Climbing the steps to the roof of the hospital, his plans are very grim. As he prepares to drop, something miraculous happens. Sometimes, the world works in strange ways, or should I say, other worlds.
there's your description :)
1705039 Well then... this changes everything.
*looks back and yells something at two people in labcoats who are identical to each other; they start rumaging through filing cabinets making papers fly everywhere as more, identical labcoat clad people, join in the search of missed info*
I'll see what I can do.
*walks into crowd of people in labcoats, all of whom are identical to himself, and seemingly ignores the chaos while doing so*
--RoamingHooves--
1705042
Dude, you have saved me. THANK YOU! That's PERFECT!
1705113
I did try to write a shameless self-insert... once. Never typed it out (Was written on paper. Six whole chapters, never typed out, since it was quite, well, bad, to be honest with myself.)
I discovered I could not write self inserts without screwing continuity up, so I stopped. I could write from the perspective of a character who is not a brony, and do their reactions, but self-inserts are hard, since I really don't know how I'd react.
1705113*cough cough*
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1705438
It's okay. But thanks for the criticism.
I know it's too short right now ((Most of the time I'm working, and it's hard to write when I'm dead tired - merchandiser/cashier, and I pick up a lot of shifts.)) but I will be adding more.
Okay, for those of you who might have noticed, I did a little editing on Chapter 1.
1683740 I can write a better storry!
Yaya. I can. How about one about an evil rainbow factory?
Or Big Mac on a raping spree?
Hm..
1718413
No, just... no. I've read both of those. Never, ever mention those to me again.
Yes.
Just
Yes.
1732250
Thanks.
I really love this fic!
You really worked well on the beginning, description of the nightmares and the story is superb!
You my friend, deserve more than a like!
1788783
Spasibo, Danke Shon, and thank you.
1788799
Wait a second,
Are you Russian?
1789008
No, no. Canadian. I know a little Russian, mostly hello, goodbye, thank you, and fool.
4626461 Because I'm looking for a job right now. I might come back to this story eventually, when I feel I'm not absolutely useless at writing.